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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-01-13 11:57 AM

She pens with quill in hand
in soft vanilla candlelight
love weeping from her heart
in the silhouettes of the night

Upon parchment paper
stained by bleeding tears
torn between the shadows
in the fate of midnight clear

Her quivering lip she tenderly bites.
while soft fragile hand lovingly writes

Clad in gossamer moonlight
penning her ink of passion
her Dear one ..Knight Chulwood
within her tears, and her soul
His love locked within
chambers of her heart
never to be stole

Dear Lady Ollyne, Oh where did she go?
her love as sacred as Dead Sea Scrolls..
has she found another love
or has she faded away
with memoirs of Knight Chulwood
upon shores of vanilla bouquet.

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

[This message has been edited by Victoria (01-13-2002 02:43 PM).]

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

1 posted 2002-01-13 12:02 PM

Loved the imagery in this.Very well done!

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2002-01-13 12:03 PM

Victoria,

Her quivering lip she tenderly bites.
while soft fragile hand lovingly writes

Why would she hold back? I love this write.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2002-01-13 12:04 PM

This is very beautiful,Vic. I was thinking it was me, there in the dark writing about my absent knight(knave).(

) But we are searching for lady O! I have also noticed her absence
Sandra

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

4 posted 2002-01-13 12:05 PM

Wonderful tale of yore, very stylish write I enjoyed, thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-13 12:06 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, vanilla banquet, oooohhh...that's sooooo beautiful! (sigh) May she forever quill the beauty of true love and have her lover dance with her in the ballroom of her heart forever! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always so gorgeous! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2002-01-13 12:34 PM

sodpossom..thank you very much..i am glad you enjoyed

Larry..Thank you so much..i havent read the lady's poem's lately and i did love them..glad you enjoyed Larry.

Sandra..yes i miss her memoirs to her knight..thanks for peeking in

Olias..thank you for reading..happy you enjoyed..

Noah..i had some inspiration here Noah..
thanks dear one for your sweet response..

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-13 12:34 PM

Well done Victoria~I have missed her also.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-01-13 12:55 PM

Oh, that she swift come again
a romance lay beneath her pen
we seek the shore, the wind, the plains
beseeching her to come again

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

9 posted 2002-01-13 01:02 PM

Victoria - Excellent imagery and flow in this write. Well done.

Dave

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-01-13 02:20 PM

Oh boy,  and what was the name you called
me????  I think you have done very well with
this...The Knight and the Lady....  Enjoyed
Victoria...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2002-01-13 02:26 PM

It flows like silk...one of my favorites...James

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2002-01-13 02:27 PM

What a tender call to a wonderful poetess, to grace these pages once more. Beautifully penned, Victoria.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2002-01-13 02:28 PM

This is so touching and I for one am reading far beyond the words. I can't help my tears. This was so very thoughtful of you Victoria. I anticipate her return and the endearing magic of her words.

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2002-01-13 02:33 PM

Nancy..thank you..yes im sure many do miss Lady..thanks for peeking in hon..hugs

Sunshine..thank you im sure a little white dove will take her your message.

Dave..thank you so much for your nice comments.

Magnus..thank you..Knight Chulwood..im happy you enjoyed my bittersweet words..

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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2002-01-13 02:40 PM

James..thank you..happy to hear that..

Midnitesun..thank you..yes i hope my idea
will influence her return.

Ms.Serenade..yes what would really be nice
if Knight Chulwood returned too.

hugs

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

16 posted 2002-01-13 03:04 PM

She pens with quill in hand
in soft vanilla candlelight
love weeping from her heart
in the silhouettes of the night

The imagery in this one is unbelievably beautiful, victoria...
I loved it!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

17 posted 2002-01-13 05:20 PM

Thank you Madame...always makes me feel good when someone likes my words..hugss..

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

18 posted 2002-01-14 01:46 PM

Victoria, again you've done it, I do sound like a broken record, but tis the truth....La Queen of Romance~!

lovely forlorn images~! nicely done my friend~!

*S*

Atov

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

19 posted 2002-01-14 02:41 PM

Victoria - my Lady Ollyne do not miss, for I have stolen her heart...

BC

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

20 posted 2002-01-14 03:24 PM

thank you ATOV...im glad you enjoyed reading..thank you for peeking in..

Sir Charles...thank you for telling me, i was worried ha..

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

21 posted 2002-01-14 03:48 PM

Lost

Dearest Lady ~V
fear not for me,
but for my loss
and sad of tone.
I am, but now,
so all alone.

Words do not grace
nor arms embrace,
no sign received
from dove in white,
in darkness covered
I am, each night.

My Knight 'tis fled,
no more be read
of memoirs old
nor love in wait.
This Lady's dreams
have met their fate.

Most gracious thanks
for remembering,
Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

22 posted 2002-01-14 03:51 PM

Oh Victoria , this gave me the chills. As I write at night, and always, always have a vanilla candle on..It is a beautiful poem, I love it. floria

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

23 posted 2002-01-14 05:24 PM

Thank you Lady Ollyne..i miss you and may you be happy again..as you so deserve..hugs

floria...well i must light my candles in the night too for a change and see what i come up with ha..glad you enjoyed floria..hugss

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

24 posted 2002-01-14 09:25 PM

Victoria,

this is really one of your best.
very very pretty....

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

25 posted 2002-01-14 09:48 PM

thank you Annie..so nice of you to say..appreciate you peeking in tonight hugss
say hello to Robert.

~Vic

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