Open Poetry #18 |
The Many Disguises Of You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
You are the mist that lies low over the valley Your presence moves like the wind through the trees You're the gull that glides over the ocean Your love is so welcome like a warm Summer's breeze You are the first Spring flower in the meadow After the cold of the Winter is no more You are the falling Autumn leaves That land softly on the grassy floor You are the embers that burn brightly in the fire And the reason I keep coming back for more You are the chain of gold around my neck And the key to my heart's door So many images of you are all around me Within nature you take on many a disguise So many beautiful qualities I see As each day holds a new surprise Suetang |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe someone received a lovely necklace, for this is twice I've seen the reference, and Sue? I can feel the smile... |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very beautifully said. Thanks. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Suetang, Oh I love this! It's so sweet And the flow is perfect. Well done Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I love this. Just beautiful! |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Fine read Sue. Love some of these metaphores. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! (smiles) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, you truly are a Queen of Romance. (kiss on cheek) May he forever plant flowers in your heart and warm your heart everyday with his embers of passion! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Beautiful poem, with lots of love and style I liked very much. Regards, Olias. |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
A great story of how love can multiply in so many ways. People should make more comparisons instead of so many times thinking about themself.. Your good friend, Roger |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
So very beautiful....Your heart writes love through eyes that see it in all the wonders of nature around her....absolutely magnificent. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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