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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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The essence of my fantasies whispering in my ear like a rustle in the breeze tells me what I long to hear. Excitement that exceeds puts me into overdrive when you take me to the limit far beyond my hearts desire. Settling beneath in my secret hiding place you are the soft and tangible touch cast and captured on my sea. To the brink where I am pushed releasing me as I let go connecting with my heart strings there to catch me when I fall. You are the cloud I'm drifting through fitting in the missing piece completing that which puzzles me wonders that will never cease. Seasoning my appetite the main course on my menu you are the sweetness in the sugar the vintage in my wine. Like flowers line a pathway in the here where we are now you are the bouquet in my vase the fragrance that I favor. You are the stroke upon my brush the painting in the picture our time within the frame for all my days you'll linger.... [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (01-13-2002 02:15 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, all the essence of your fantasies come alive in your gorgeous words of love and happiness! (sigh) May his clouds forever caress your skies and may he forever sugar-coat your feelings and paint your hearts joys! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Seasoning my appetite the main course on my menu you are the sweetness in the sugar the vintage in my wine. Lovely Ms.Serenade...you described it well.. enjoyed your words..hugs ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - this is lovely. Sweet words from a poet... BC |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Noah, thank you for your warm reply. It is sweet but far from sugar coated, and that is the very best part. Victoria, I thank you for reading and always there to give me hugs..... I really do appreciate them and you. Bill Charles, thanks so much for taking the time to tell me so. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
A Wonderfully written touching tribute to your love, much enjoyed. Regards, Olias. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
OH this is SO beautiful  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Olias, I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thank you very much. SEA, guess you could say I was in the mood for love. Thanks for reading. |
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