Open Poetry #18 |
Promises of Tomorrow |
KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
The dim light of the moon shimmers Gently................ Through crystal window pane Spatters of silver upon cold floor The silvery silence bares his soul, As his body presses against mine, His warm skin beads with sweat, The essence of his life. A quiet rendezvous Sacred Secrets. His sweet breath tickles my ear With dreams of this new day And promises of tomorrow. Aloha with warmest regards, Koko Please Visit my new web-page http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111 [This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (01-12-2002 10:55 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderfully penned! -Sllver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this one likes me!! Wonderfully sensual! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
KokoStewartKoomoa - warm is your write, with sweet, sweet promises of tomorrow... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Warm and passionate...such a vision... enjoyed this... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigth) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is soooo sensually gorgeous! I love it, sweet friend, may his love fill you with joy every tomorrow! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A pleasurable poem of content...this is a treat from you, Koko...a sound of happy... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
koko, love just oozes from this incredible and sensual penning. wonderful... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Koko...James |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
What a gem of a poem this is!!!!! Wonderful expression and depth of emotion. ***Ivy Rose |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a romantic poem, and what a cool line: "The silvery silence bares his soul" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Wonderful hopeful poem, Koko, so good to read your words again. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a promise of tomorrow, frozen in today. . . wonderful Koko. . . good to see you again. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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