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Embraced by Heaven
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Embraced by Heaven |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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In your arms, it feels like heaven Safeguarded in they're snug closure It may not be the real heaven but it's my closest exposure Your arms are either outstretched Or encircling me like a gate Feeling heaven through you isn't far-fetched It is simply my God sent fate I feel like a treasured doll of porcelain When we embrace cheek to cheek Your love's a priceless fortune I always intend to keep I feel like I'll wake up any minute As if it's a daydream in my head but it's reality and I live it Too heavenly to comprehend |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
When love comes upon you you do feel like heaven is embracing you! Joanna this poem is so heartfelt...I needed to read this! Thanks for the read! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sometimes love is so hard to explain but you have put it perfectly in this poem....Love is truly heavenly....Love looks good on you...**big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
I agree with Karen! Love is heavenly, and it strikes with unbelieveable power. Great poem, I'm sure your love Noah will like it very much. I loved it! From your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna, This is just so pretty I like the line about the porcelain doll  Just wonderful!Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Joanna a sweet loving wonderful poem. floria |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Very good, you sound like you're in love. Best wishes. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
aw.............this is sooooo sweet Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Joanna....so sweet and loving....enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (kiss on lips) OH MY GOSH, I LOVE THIS!!! (sigh) I dream ever so much of holding you close to my heart, and I have faith that somesay we'll be together and I'll sahre heaven with you! (kiss on lips) I love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true angel to me and I will always love you! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
RosePetal - Like the idea of this one. To see heaven on earth through the feeling of love for another. Very good. Dave |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Joanna...hope all your dreams come true..hugss ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It's just beautiful, the power of love. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love can make you feel that way....such beauty here... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JoAnna...I believe you have said it perfectly. Four little letters..when put together.. brings us all that we want, all we need. Such is love.... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thank You All! I hope each and every one of you will feel heaven through your lover's embrace. It is the best feeling. Thanks again, for the wonderful feedback |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Joannah darling girl there is nothing like love to make you feel happy and to see you feeling sooooooo revived and refreshed ahhh darling girl I'll forgive you those few tears you've caused me. Utterly Utterly beautiful writing, what could be more perect that The Rose Petal and The Angel. I know you will be eternally happy for HE wants us to be blessed by love.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
awww so tender and sweet i loved it. kinda reminds me of a song i wrote. i always felt safe in her arms *hugs*love ya jesse So tonight I'll ask |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Very nice, Joanna!!! Could it be that Mistletoe Angel is the recipient of this love? BEAUTIFUL and SENTIMENTAL poem!!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I say enjoy it while you can!! This was lovely, RosePetal. All writing comes |
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