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Discovery..................(to appease Marsha)
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Discovery..................(to appease Marsha) |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Horizon shimmering from the sunrise Orange reflections are within my eyes As this savior awakens from the east, it allows my spirit to be released It can fly, though its wings are battered and it can feel, though its heart is tattered And I beg it not to traverse back to me, for today, I’ll relish this discovery That some rivers truly run down stream, it is possible to wake up to a dream, there’s boundless hope in the tiniest of rays and the importance of cherishing each day These orange reflections within my eyes, a gift given to us all in a sunrise, are like a drop of blood to a dying heart, providing inspiration for a fresh start © David 2002 [This message has been edited by GenXer (01-12-2002 03:58 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Simply magical...she will love it. You gave a beautiful vision of discovery to me...I love what my eyes saw...Thank you. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love it, your words always paint such beautiful visions, I just know Marsha will love this so so much! (big hugggsssss) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love and inspiration form in all our hearts and fill us with glee! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If this doesn't appease her, I don't know what will... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's lovely and you know probably just seeing her name in the title will bring a smile to her face Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dave darling boy THANK YOU This is utterly utterly one of the most beautiful pieces you've ever written. See how happy you've made me? I'm smiling a huge smile. And YOU have to know a smile suits me far better than tears. Naturally enough darling boy I know you feel better writing smiles. Okay I'm appeased however.... If YOU enjoyed writing a happy piece please do it again. Dave it is fabulous all joking aside YOU have a wonderful talent and this proves it. And I'm keeping it, into my library darling boy.... it's okay YOU'LL be okay the Witch of the web is waiting to keep you company   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dave, How could you do this to me! She thought my work was good but after seeing yours she will put mine straight into the bin. How can the moon compare to the sun? I love what you've done with sun's rays oh Father Sun. Keth (Who is not speaking to you ever again!) Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Dave! And...just look at Marsha jumping up and down across the pond! Good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this flows very well. . . a picture of what the sun can bring to an empty heart. . . well done. . . and, if it appeases Mushy, then it must be good. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Nicely crafted piece |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Too beautiful I like this very much. |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Such a beautiful picture you have placed in my mind. Nicely written. Hugs Fee Expressions, |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Dave, just loverly.. You should see my face.. a wistful, hopeful smile adorns it Enjoyed!!! Pepper |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"some rivers truly run down stream," I love all your words in this piece, wonderful beautiful poem GenX. floria |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Dave This is truly a beautiful piece.Ok I lied.Now to say how I feel,oh I already have.One of your best my friend! |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Dave,I knew you could do it! See it didn`t take much to make Marsha happy. .I`ll be back tomorrow to give you a cute graphic.I bet you can`t hardly wait.Well.I believe that makes 2 fingers I have used to count your happy poems.  Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (01-13-2002 05:39 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is exquisitely beautiful, Dave... and Marsha will love it even more when you give it to her in person...you can wrap her NY pizza in it, then maybe it won't taste so bad....or you can get some Michigan pizza to give her along with this beautiful poem.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Dave,I told you I would be back and I wouldn`t lie to a friend.   Juanita |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Dave, I'm floating on cloud nine. This is so lovely and full of hope. It's beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Cheryl |
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