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One Tear ... Two
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One Tear ... Two |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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One Tear ... Two ~*Marge Tindal*~ One tear fell on another tear falling clinging to each other they became a mighty pouring of emotion sweeping lost lovers again down a river of heartfelt sorrow steady in the flow to ocean Down the cheek of swift deny It's okay ... it's okay to cry~ For the tears shed in longing finding their way to the sea return to bathe a memory in waves when the heart can't speak~ *She/He will know just who this is for~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh, what an exquisite ache you have penned along with a sad truth. 1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You have traced the tear to its source and back. Now that is a class act.  |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
You could not have written this for just one without a wave of us understanding... thank you! |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
So creative! So true! Excellent! |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Marge, very lovely expressions in your poem. Tears can be healing as well and this piece seem to give that hope. Cheryl |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Marge... This is just how I feel right now. Thank you for sharing it with us. Bec  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yet again, you reach in and touch my soul.....I love this Marge |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is such a touching poem. This is how I feel alot of times. Thank you for sharing this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ YOU are pretty '1derful' too, sweet friend~ Seymour~ You, sir ... are a class act yourself~ Thank you, dear man~ SoleilNoir~ Thank you for letting me know~ I appreciate the reply~ Ocelot~ Thank you so very much~ HisPoet~ Cheryl ... yes ... and thank you for seeing that~ Bec~ I will hold your tears, sweet friend~ Thank you for 'letting' me share~ SEA~ You 'know' that I 'know' ... We are in sync-at-the-heart~  SmartChick~ Yes, my friend .. and I appreciate you letting me know~ *Hugs* to all of you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, if there should come a time, as there will because there always does, that I am sitting in the wreckage of my heart I hope that you will be there to pen my soul. I know you'll do it justice. This is utterly first class writing, as always you have the golden touch As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
What nice sentiment in this, I love how you did this,Marge, floria |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
Love and sorrow do seem to go hand in hand sometimes. Both powerful emotions. I really liked this Marge. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice way to put it Marge...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I think this poem has touched more than just the one it was meant for....Magnificent, Marge...You captured so much in these words and touched me deeply as well. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love the world through your teary eyes Exquisite Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ I don't want to do it ! ! So .. please don't go there ... but, know that if you should ... I will be here to hold your tears~ Strbbux~ Thank you so much, Floria~ Sunset~ Thank you so much. Welcome among the pages blue~ JamesMichael~ Thank you, sweet friend~ StarTime~ To 'touch' is a mission I must fulfill~ I am pleased to know that it 'touched' you too~ LizzieLady~ Awwwww ~ It can get might misty behind these eyes~ Thank you, sweetie~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, when I weep please be there to turn my tears into crystal write...as you did this night. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Thank you dear one~ I will be there/here ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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