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Open Poetry #18

two lovers and a lady

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

0 posted 2002-01-12 02:28 AM

He went home.
Out of sight, out of mind for me.
And for awhile it was the way it had always been,
flirting,
glances,
comments, (that I read too much in to)
and sometimes touches.
And then he mentions HIS name,
and suddenly, even in his absense,
he is there.
Sitting in between us,
this rock I can not climb over.
But that I can only hope,
one day crumbles.
*Sorry guys my computer has been freaking out all christmas break. I hope everyone had nice holidays and I miss you all!!!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-01-12 02:49 AM

Rebekah, Interesting concept and a good write.
Kethry

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-01-12 10:32 AM

Sometimes it's hard to forgive and forget. Good poem!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-12 02:46 PM

(sigh) My words echo Poet DeVine's, sweet friend, this is a very touching poem! (kiss on cheek) We've all missed you so much, sweet friend, it's so great to see you again! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rebekah, thank you for sharing!

May love and light alway shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-12 03:49 PM

It can be hard sometimes to keep someone out of our thoughts when we had built such dreams with them in mind...A well written poem that I could feel. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-12 05:28 PM

Rebekah, this is very well done,
and it is sooo nice to see you back here!
Happy New Year!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

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