Open Poetry #18 |
With You, Missing You |
brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
With You, Missing You Your touch I miss the most of all gentle, calming nerves enthrall now when I try to pull you near whisper “I love you” in your ear my arms draw air, empty embrace as molten tears sear down my face gentle words I speak to you of joy in finding love so true you cannot hear my longing plea can’t find the voice to answer me I watch you sobbing in your sleep once more the tears begin to seep I wish to comfort your despair your tortured soul I would repair but nothing that I try will halt the sadness that your heart assaults it breaks my heart to see you hurt I wish to the past we could revert where hand in hand we met the world in joy and love our days unfurled sadly those days have come to end in time your broken heart will mend so I sit helpless, wailful of your pain convulsing in sorrow, crying in vain I wish to hold you, comfort your fear push back your hair, kiss dry the tear but I can’t help you, stay your cry who was to know that I would die Penned for my late brother-in law, dedication to the special love they shared and the sense of loss that I'm sure carries on into the next "Plain" of existance |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
brian - this heartfelt poem left me in tears, well done sir. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
So sad...very sad indeed...sorry about your brother-in-law..this was very touching..beautifully written.. ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
very sad poem, lovely dedication, sorry about the loss in your family..I hope that that can be mended in some way |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very, very well penned Brian....I am sure a most difficult one to write. Stay warm, hugs, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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