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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-01-11 07:29 PM



With You, Missing You

Your touch I miss the most of all
gentle, calming nerves enthrall
now when I try to pull you near
whisper “I love you” in your ear
my arms draw air, empty embrace
as molten tears sear down my face
gentle words I speak to you
of joy in finding love so true
you cannot hear my longing plea
can’t find the voice to answer me
I watch you sobbing in your sleep
once more the tears begin to seep
I wish to comfort your despair
your tortured soul I would repair
but nothing that I try will halt
the sadness that your heart assaults
it breaks my heart to see you hurt
I wish to the past we could revert
where hand in hand we met the world
in joy and love our days unfurled
sadly those days have come to end
in time your broken heart will mend
so I sit helpless, wailful of your pain
convulsing in sorrow, crying in vain
I wish to hold you, comfort your fear
push back your hair, kiss dry the tear
but I can’t help you, stay your cry
who was to know that I would die


Penned for my late brother-in law, dedication to
the special love they shared and the sense of loss that I'm sure carries on into the next "Plain" of existance

© Copyright 2002 Brian Beaudry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-11 07:34 PM


brian - this heartfelt poem left me in tears, well done sir. Chris

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2 posted 2002-01-11 07:36 PM


So sad...very sad indeed...sorry about your brother-in-law..this was very touching..beautifully written..

               ~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-01-11 07:42 PM


very sad poem, lovely dedication, sorry about the loss in your family..I hope that that can be mended in some way


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4 posted 2002-01-11 07:55 PM


Very, very well penned Brian....I am sure a most difficult one to write.
Stay warm, hugs, Nancy.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

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