Open Poetry #18 |
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Did you Ever? |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869![]() |
Did you ever do something you regret? even if in a dream or not regret something you should have because it tasted like whip cream Did you ever fly off to meet a stranger? somewhere a little bit dangerous Did you awake from a dream and still have teardrops in your eyes try to fall back to sleep in arms of a romantic surprise In a land where dreams come true where only there is just you and who??? in a land of cotton candy wishes a land of moonlight and roses and Eskimos rubbing noses Blue eyed huskies sledding you away to a snow castle by Igloo bay upon a bearskin rug you stay and hope that Elvis is alive and well, and forever in his arms you will dwell.. *now who could feel guilty about that* "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Yes, yes, yes!!!!! Elvis is alive and well in my dreams, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY!!! (big hugggsssss) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful, we can be anyone in our dreams, and we can see anything we want our hearts to see! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, Elvis will always live on, the weather will always be nice, and we will roll around in our Garden Of Eden with our imagination and loving hearts! We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautfiul heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Thank ya, thank ya very mush in my best Elvis voice. Please e-mail me, darlin', as I've gotta hunka hunka burnin' love heh - lil Victoria will fall for my excellent Elvis impersonation and I will be able to fool her into joining my fan club That wazza, wazza, very nice pome, Victoria. Actually, I did enjoy it very much. |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very pretty, Victoria. ![]() -silver streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
This makes me smile. But I'll take Elvira instead. Very good. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you inot2b...i love Elvis..those last 2 lines just popped in my head out of the blue... ![]() Noah thank you..yes dreams are wonderful arent they..i dont know where nightmares come from though haa ![]() thank you lngjhn...for that wonderful impersonation haa...i am so happy you peeked in today...glad you enjoyed ![]() newell..thank you for your sweet comments ![]() thank you mirror man...well let me know when you dream of her haa...good luck... ![]() |
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HumbleBee Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 52Kentucky |
very good poem...a touch of humor...and as I said, I love poems about dreams. I just love this forum...smiles. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Victoria...I think we all have either wanted to do this...or have...and feel the same way you do...nicely said... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Flying off to meet a stranger? I hear Florida is wonderful this time of year!! ![]() Elvis has not yet left the building! ![]() |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - Did you Ever? I have... And a great poem/// BC |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Victoria, This one made me smile and hope for a trip to dreamland quite shortly. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you humblebee..and welcome to the forum..I hope you enjoy yourself.. ![]() thank you Magnus..If you cant fly away for more than a day ha..yes dream the night away Deery..ha..i love Naples this time of year.. ![]() Bill.. ![]() Chris..Good luck with your dreams ![]() "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Often thought about it, but....*LOL* maybe one day.... ![]() Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
the land of wishes and want-nots that's where i want to be *s* Every time i read your words, i get happily lost. sooo nice, Victoria, and psssst.....bP says hi *wink* tSR |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lauren..thank you...Glad you enjoyed my dreamland ha.. ![]() Shadowrider..winkie dink back haa.. ![]() ![]() |
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