Open Poetry #18 |
His Name was Frannie |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I remember when i first met you i was with my girlfriend you got into her car into the backseat we were at a drive-in you know like the one in American Graffiti You said "It smells nice in here" and just kiddingly i said, "I think it must be because i am here" You said i was conceited and got out. The next night i was sitting inside the Chuck Wagon, having a coke with Viola. I didnt know you had arranged with her to bring me back again. You pulled up and waved and we got in your car she got out right away...and you pulled away with me. I realized we had not even been introduced.. I remember you had a tiger in your tank.. The tank of your blue Pontiac.. the tail whipping in the wind We ended up parking at Hagley museum where you tried to get fresh with me.. by the lake, alone in the moonlight. I said "No"..and you said "Why not"? and i said "Because i said so" I wonder if you remember the night you said you loved me well, i just couldnt say i love you back even though i might have loved you in my own way..a little bit i just didnt want to hurt you i knew you werent the one.. but i still have that memory of you loving me a high school memory, the way it use to be.. "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." ~ David Viscott [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-11-2002 01:59 PM).] |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,some high school memories are so sweet.This poem brings back a few of them. Juanita |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is such a precious memory! May you always hold onto these happy memories, for they are forever! (smiles) This makes me wish my high school sweetheart was in the same class as me right now and we can go on a date like this and have some wild cherry Pepsis! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you juanita...lots of high memories ha...thanks for peeking in hon Hugs Noah..you enjoy your youth hon..times flys when you are having fun..hugs |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a nice one, ~V..I don't have quite the memories you have, I was with the one I loved from start to finish for 31 years...never having the joy of other experiences. M |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love this memory...it brings back many a time....nice ~V~ Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-12-2002 11:34 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you M..im sure you do have some sweet memories..and the best is yet to come hugss Lauren...thanks..yes im sure you have quiet a few..its fun thinking back sometimes..hugs |
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