Shall I Outline the Demise

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A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

0 posted 2002-01-11 11:48 AM

If I bestow the secret,
Utilizing a precise tone of voice
Shall I outline the demise?

I crave the comfort of sanctuary
your desires levitating to imported silks
and the exuberance of wild violets.
You tell me you love me,
that I am the smooth taste
of comprehension
a living soul mirroring
reflections

I love you, I declare,
in a spectacular way
tainted by
circumstance
and unframed thoughts

If I bestow the secret
Utilizing this precise
Tone of voice
Shall I outline the
Demise?

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-01-11 11:51 AM

Beautiful writing. I love your echo.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-01-11 11:58 AM

I love it ATOV..

nicely done

~Vic

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-01-11 12:03 PM

ATOV~Very unique...I love your tone!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-11 12:07 PM

(smiles) Soooooo well-said, sweet friend, may true love find its way! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, may all your secrets light with joy to loves heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-01-11 12:07 PM

*sigh* an echoe that repeats softly from a questing heart. Well done and very tender. I love it..I hope you receive the answer your heart desires. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

6 posted 2002-01-11 09:11 PM

Yes, I like this too. Very good.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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7 posted 2002-01-11 09:38 PM

Enjoyed...James

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
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8 posted 2002-01-12 01:02 AM

some of the best writing i've seen at passions in my 3 years here since this place opened....

i rise to applaud!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

9 posted 2002-01-12 07:28 AM

ATOV,
Don't you take that tone with me! lol Seriously though this poem has tone and style.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

10 posted 2002-01-12 08:47 AM

ATOV,this was wonderful!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2002-01-12 08:57 AM

Tone of voice,
Tone of voice and body language will do it ever time. Enjoyed.

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

12 posted 2002-01-12 09:23 AM

While all of your work has the workings of master writing
this particular poem brought together the spice of love,
and the pitfalls of head over heels emotions.

The allure of love is sometimes the danger....so does that make you,....uh,
dangerous? *smiles*

always a great pleasure to read the All-Terrain-Vehicle....er...A-Tone of Voice...sorry.....Huugg tSR

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