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Puppeteer Extraordinaire
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Puppeteer Extraordinaire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Puppeteer Extraordinaire A puppeteer extraordinaire. Manipulating strings of share An arrogance in willful wage Turns my head and bends' my back, A dancing puppet on a rack. Capricious is her playful gage. Unbeknown I side with her. This upside down utopia. No need the puppet on a stage. She pulls the strings skillfully Almost always convincing me. No matter what the outrage still I cannot understand her zeal Or the unction of her anneal. |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
Very well done, Seymour. I remember your writings from when I was here before, and that I always enjoyed them.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Manipulating strings of share An arrogance in willful wage Turns my head and bends' my back, A dancing puppet on a rack. Capricious is her playful gage. This upside down utopia. . ====================================== Only you could come up with a line like this: "Or the unction of her anneal." your comand of vocabulary is a impressive as your command of rhyme and verse. Love the style of this one ... ya even snuck in an alliteration with your internal rhyme. and as for those strings..methinks Randy can chew thru them with ease...should he wish to  very cool poem Stinkylove *ww*  meI ask why you come here, you say just because |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh I love this, pulling your strings uh? great write. floria |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunset, Glad your back missed you. Thanks for the read and reply. JM, The upside down utopia has Randys head in a spin :spun:  WW SFloria, Doesn't everyone get their strings pulled? LOL Thanks |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully written, Sy....and in answer to Floria, I disagree...not everyone gets their strings pulled.....I don't...but I try to be the one who is pulling the strings of others.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My strings were pulled by others, dear who did not allow me my morning cheer I saw in wonder with near dismay this which almost...got away! [Almost, but not quite!] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* sometimes we can be a willing puppet....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - at times the strings are pulled but we know not where. Great write about the Puppeteer... BC |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, I volunteered to be a puppet once, But the tension was not right. It hurt so bad I cut the strings, And that's when I took flight! [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-11-2002 12:52 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Madame, Well someone is getting their strings pulled. LOL *L* Sunshine, Can I make it up with a Startime, Big back.Bill, Excellent comment. Larry C, My  to you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, you are a puppeteer, pulling our strings with extraordinary flair, whether far or near making us dance in the write of your air Keth. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, Thank you so much for that lovely response. *L*. |
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