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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-10 10:03 PM

My nights bring me the greatest joy.
Dreams which hold you there with me.
My days bring moments of impatience.
Oh my love, I so yearn to see your eyes.

Have you forgotten this man of your dreams?
One that comes in shadows from outside.
One who brings sighs from your soft lips..
Moans of pleasure that flow from within.

Can you not feel my caress, each soft touch?
For...even now I am holding you to me.
Can you not smell the musk of my scent?
A scent which arouses you, arouses me.

We make love each night I come to you.
Our passions flow freely between us then.
The shudders of ecstacy rattle the shades.
Your arms clutch and cling to me as one.

Your coldest night now a summer breeze.
Your glow once dim, now ever so bright.
Movements against pillows thought me.
Your eyes shut, yet seeing my soft eyes.

I am here my love, in your land of dreams.
I shall take you into the waiting night.
Our love will consume us in the glow
as we each lie sleeping in a soft place.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2002-01-10 10:06 PM

.....this sizzles.......

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 2002-01-10 10:07 PM

Beautiful and romantic words, Magnus....I can feel the love and adoration in every stanza. Exellent poetry!

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

3 posted 2002-01-10 10:08 PM

Beautiful and passionate words of love echo throughout this dream of a poem. ***Ivy Rose

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

4 posted 2002-01-10 10:08 PM

Hello Magnus
This was so very sensual and so very romantic. A perfect picture of love and longing. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-01-10 10:13 PM

Sue...Ouch...I just burned my hand on my pen.
still glowing hot...

Thanx..

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-01-10 10:24 PM

*sigh* this is truly a poem made for dreaming and dreamers....It is filled with sensual romance as only our Master Of Romance can write it. I am going to find that soft place for dreams and see if there is a dreamer there for me. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-01-10 10:25 PM

Alwye...thank you...a hard night to get the
pen to flow...too many irons in the fire..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-10 10:29 PM

Suetang, thank you...and you have been
posting some very nice words yourself..

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2002-01-10 10:30 PM

This is the most passionate, sensual, loving, descriptive
work of art I've ever read. It breathes through every line
and weaves a picture of two people sharing the most
intimate joys! Why, your pen is flowing just fine,
we don't believe that

In fact, I believe the ink
is sizzling which is why you have to use the keyboard.
Any woman would be thrilled to be the object of so
much affection!

And it's lovely also!!!!!!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-01-10 10:31 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you always write the most beautiful declarations of true love! (sigh) May you forever rest in soft comfort and beauty with the love of your life, we all love you so much! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

11 posted 2002-01-10 10:35 PM

Beautiful words penned from the heart of a true romantic!! Great poem my friend!!!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-01-10 10:37 PM

Magnus - ouch, ouch, hot, hot! Phew, let me cool off, a good one this is....

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-01-10 10:39 PM

Karen...I ate the oysters tonite...Hick!!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-01-10 10:41 PM

Ivy...thanx....happy that you and others are
liking this little delicacy...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2002-01-10 10:42 PM

Kay...you are almost making me blush...IF I
didn't know better...I would say it was
someone else commenting for you...

Thank You, Thank You, Thank You.....

Yep, that is why I am using the keyboard..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2002-01-10 10:44 PM

Noah...thanx again and again and again...
you are a trip...

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

17 posted 2002-01-10 10:45 PM

Ah, go on and blush. Why, a man who is so open
with the things you have written about should be applauded.

I wonder how many men would have the sensitivity
to write what you just did?

And how do you know this is me?

ha ha, why someone else may have taken over my body?
Oops, I just checked, no that's me.

yep, that's me.....allowing myself to have some fun
and give an honest reply!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2002-01-10 10:47 PM

Brian, good to see you again...thanx much..
I owe you a few posts too...thanx again..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2002-01-10 10:52 PM

BC...thanx....and sorry have been missing
our electronic rendezvous...very busy..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

20 posted 2002-01-10 10:53 PM

Kay, oh Kay???? Are you there Kay???

I know that is not you...Where are you Kay??

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

21 posted 2002-01-10 10:58 PM

Oh, I got rid of her, she was boring!

This is the other "Kay" the one who reads
love poems!!!

no, seriously, I really enjoyed this.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

22 posted 2002-01-10 11:01 PM

and while she's gone, the other kay, I mean
why don't we have this conversation on one
of my threads (I'm teasing!!!!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

23 posted 2002-01-10 11:05 PM

Kay....one question, if I may???

HAVE YOU BEEN DRINKING TONIGHT//??

OR, EATING OYSTERS??

SILLY WOMAN...I THINK I PUSHED YOUR
FUNNY BUTTON TONIGHT...IT IS GREAT..

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

24 posted 2002-01-10 11:06 PM

oysers? I am Irish, I need no oysters.
hey I pressed the key and wasn't finished yet,
this poem is
lovely!

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (01-10-2002 11:07 PM).]

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

25 posted 2002-01-10 11:08 PM

and no, I don't drink, I am already aged..........................

hey that wasn't funny, Kathleen,

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

26 posted 2002-01-10 11:09 PM

and now that I've began page two I will say goodnight,

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (01-11-2002 08:16 AM).]

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

27 posted 2002-01-10 11:59 PM

This..this..Is just so sensuous...I enjoyed it so much..beautiful poetry you write!

Shelly

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