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In Want Of You
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In Want Of You |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In Want Of You ~*Marge Tindal*~ In soft awakening I feel the silken breath of you move across bare skin Teasing with pleasing, arousal from deep within Come into my morning, dear Take this love I have for sharing Foreverly in want of you Foreverly in arduous caring Tattle-tale shivers give me away as I come in greet of the morn I love the awakening of you in my day within your arms of new-day adorn Subtle sighs of satisfaction linger long quilted cozy in the all of you after the sun has sung its' song Awaken again the day in me … for I love being loved by you~ *Thank you, tweetie-pie~ P u r r r r r r r r r~ January 2, 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge...I find it hard to believe that no one has commented on this yet...for it is a beautiful poem of love and romance... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
My, my, my - this is sweet and passionate! Cor |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very tender and romantic. floria |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh wow, Marge! You are full of romantic poems. This as another beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with me. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tattle-tale shivers give me away ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Marge...this is my favourite line... well, one of my favourite lines! You sure sound 'in love' woman!! And I for one am so happy for you! Enjoyed so much, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Little Goose, it does me good to see you so happy...very gentle smile |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice and sensual Marge...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mm, there is that "foreverly" again. I think you are far too happy..  What a miracle love can be. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart I love this one utterly utterly love it. ITS SOOOOOOOO YOU, sensual and sooooooo tender. Well done darling girl. I love the way you wear love it's so becoming.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Wow.. this took my breath!!! Wonderful work, as per your usual !!! Pepper |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ If it received no other reply ... knowing you enjoyed it would be more than enough~  Thank you always for the sweet replies~ Corinne~ Thanks, sweetie~ Strbbux~ Thank you very much~ SmartChick~ Ahhhhh, Sue ... I love sharing with you~ Thanks so much~ Enchantress~ How'd you do that ??? Mine too~ Thanks gal~ Logan~  JamesMichael~ Thanks bunches~ CatalinaMoon~ Yes ... foreverly ... is the perfect phrase for how we feel~ Can't be 'too happy' ... but ... I'll try~  MarshaLove~ *Hugs* to you dear girl~ Sister of my soul .. I love ya'~ PepperMint~ Thank you sooooo much~ It's so good to see you~  ~*Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
this one suits you -- very soft and tenderThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...A wonderful love song to the one you adore. Unique wording gives this poem a beautiful texture, exquisite points of starlight beauty. ***Ivy Rose |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Beautifully romantic, you really have a gift for writing my pritty, it's always so uplifting and delightful to read your poetry, thanks so for sharing your heart. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* I love it when you do foreverly...this is a wonderful romantic poem. Therefore I love it....**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - this is good, very good, sensual, loving, soft. Yummy!!!! BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jamie~ Thank you so much. It's so nice to see you~ IvyRose~ Yes ... it is to the man who sets my heart to singing~ Thank you very much~ Cerenity~ I love seeing you here~ Thanks for stopping by .. come more often, okay ? StarTime~ *grinning* right back~ Me too~ ... thanks, gal~ BillCharles~ Thanks for seeing 'Yummy !!!!' in it~ It was and is ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Hey Marge...does what's his name know about this? LOL Smitten to the bone!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeyLarry~ 'what's his name' ... not only inspired it .. he got to enjoy it as much as I did !!!! Tee-Hee ... 'smitten' is about as correct as you'll ever be~ *BIG GRINS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yanno... I'd really have to scold you severely if I wasn't so happy for you... one-sided want just doesn't measure up and this shade of green I've turned is most unbecoming! LOL I can be happy for your joy AND jealous, can't I? *G* I like this sensual beauty, Marge... very much. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Tatteletale shivers" I love it! Wonderfully sensual and expressive piece. You constantly amaze me Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~ I'm not too fond of your shade of green It really just doesn't seem that you should wear it today when happiness is just a heartbeat away~ I just LOVE you gal~ InterLoper~ *grinning like the proverbial Cheshire Cat here* I hope to always amaze you~ Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, what can I say but Itis so beautiful to see you in love. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, you little hottie you. Now I am sweating and breathless. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oh Marge, I remember the first rush of love and how it hangs on so sweetly. Lovely. Dee Ooooooops!  I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (01-05-2002 05:10 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge,  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh WOW, deeply in love, I can see that. You deserve it sweet princess, enjoy! TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
BEAUTIFUL I SAW A POST ABOUT NUPTUALS.....IS IT TRUE PLEASE E-MAIL ME, I'M SO ANXIOUS TO KNOW....DETAILS AND ALL MAN, I'VE MISSED YOU ALL ON HERE |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Thank you so much ... twice ! ! It's beautiful to be there ! And it IS WONDERFUL~ Kethry~ Tee-Hee~ .... 'Me too~ Seymour~ Right back at ya', babe~ Titia~ I thank YOU sooooooooo much, sweetie~ HootieGal~ YES ! IT's TRUE ! ! Check your e-mail for details and photo~ Love to all~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ & Bill~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
as always, beautiful! |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
breathtaking beauty...the romance..passion and contentment dance.. Shelly |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Well, sweet friend...I've said it before and I'll say it again. Love looks VERY good on you! I'm so glad you've foundsomeone who makes you so happy. And, now...I must go find MINE! LOL! Loving this little touch of 'wanting'. Love you soooooo much, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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