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Open Poetry #18

This moment in me

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-10 05:14 PM

I awake to your touch
you caress my hair
you pull me near you
so close that I can hear
your heart beat
Our lips meet
in a surrendering kiss
and the rest is
forgotten
Even dawn will
take its time
It's all about
you and this
moment in me
And I want to keep you
like this
so bad
that nothing
else matters
but that need to
have you within me
We fuse
at the precise time
in the universe
in a miracle of love
to give life to life

[This message has been edited by walker (01-10-2002 06:14 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-10 05:28 PM

(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever bring life to love and warmth to each others heart forever! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, you are sooooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-10 05:53 PM

*sigh* so sensually beautiful. All that matters is that single moment in time. I felt the love and gentle desire in this poem. Absolutely beautiful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2002-01-10 08:12 PM

so romanitc

very nice

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-11 12:29 PM

This is what love should feel like.....beautiful

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

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