Open Poetry #18 |
Angel of the Dawn |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
Bringer of the beloved dawn How I love thee so For I have known Only darkness for so long Now to be filled with the warmth Of happiness and love These beautiful gifts you give to me Loneliness, once filling my being You reached in, touching my heart As gentle as an angel's wing Plucking the pain and sorrow From my shattered heart Oh how I adore thee My angel sent from heaven To finally know happiness once again After knowing only sorrow And the regret of my fears I thank you my beloved angel For bringing the light into my life Nightfall has dissipated Consumed by the sun Just as heartache and sorrow Driven away by the beauty of her light Her heavenly light which shines down Upon this lowly poet Oh my love, please let me show How I cherish you, the heart you healed Maybe one day soon, I can reveal The gifts that you bestowed upon me And that I can bring you true happiness Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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AngelGazer44 New Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 1 |
Hey Lonely.. Sounds like something special.. And that someone really cares for and cherishes you.. May you have the best of luck in everything you do.. And keep a smile on your face, maybe you'll see the world's beauty through your own eyes |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
"...upon this lowly poet..." Lonely Shadow, humility may be the best place to begin and end for a poet. I often forget that. Thank you for this quiet reminder. Bob |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Always believe in yourself and your dreams and you will make her very happy forever and ever! (big hugggsssss) We all believe in you, sweet friend, you always shine with love and smiles through your words! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* there is nothing like that priceless feeling one gets when they know they are cherished by another. This poem is so beautiful and reflects how rare and preciuos you hold the love given you. Magnificent. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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