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Open Poetry #18

Sippin’

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-01-10 07:02 AM

Slo sippin’,
The bottle ain’t quite empty
Still a sip
Passes lip
Drips in a queasy belly,
It’s not good
Without food
To be sippin’ on the mash,
But it’s cheep
And he’s meek,
Just wallowing in the trash,
Slo sippin’
Going slo to make it last.

Gloom

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-01-10 10:10 AM

smilin'...I never could make it last tho!

But yes, 'tis the weather for three fingers of gold! Enjoyed.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-01-10 10:21 AM

Oh gloom, ummmmm never had mash, me thinks it is some kind of liquor. good creative write. floria

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2002-01-10 01:19 PM

Thank you, Serenity
It wasn’t Mist he was sipping,
Of that I’m pretty sure,
But in a brown bag it was hiding,
It might have been his own cure.

Thank you, strbbux,
Sour Mash, whisky, bourbon, it was one of those types
Of hard stuff.
Glad you liked this.

Gloom

Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

4 posted 2002-01-10 04:25 PM

i'm mor of the gin type, but this stuff sounds like it's good for killin braincells. and that's what ya need sometimes...
i relate. a good write.

*simplify*

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2002-01-10 07:33 PM

I don't sip no corn mash
nor Cuervo or Bud Lite
but if you've got a Diet Coke
I'll be your friend tonight!

Enjoyed your poem sir!

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