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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-09 10:05 PM

If only I were able to say my thoughts..
If I were given just that one wish.
I would take all that I have written
and place them at your feet most humbly.

You...this brilliant sun which warms me.
The cool rain that quenches, cleans me.
Soft breezes that caress and console me.
All things I wish to ever have, to hold.

Love me, oh yes...love me ever softly.
Give me your touch, a kiss, a smile.
Hold me as my moment does to us come.
For I release my soul to your own will.

I vow to ever want, desire, need you.
I promise to adore, keep, admire you.
I give my all, all that I am for you.
Without, I am lost, life is meaningless.

I wait for dreams to invade my mind.
My heart, my breath cease until then.
This man yearns to touch your face..
My moist lips desire to tease all of you.

Come into my dreams my dearest...
You will smile as never before as one.
Our joining will tremor the mountains.
Our love will light the heavens above..

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-09 10:06 PM

For many reasons, this likes me...thank you Magnus...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2002-01-09 10:11 PM

*sigh**sigh* you have woven dreams of romance before Oh MASTER OF ROMANCE but none can light a candle to the masterpiece of this dream weaving you set before us. *sigh* The warmth of the breezes in Canada just became warmer...Oh gosh this is truly a poem to dream with. Well done....Oh my...I bet Lou is beside herself and hugging you so tightly...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2002-01-09 10:15 PM

This is so beautiful!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-09 10:28 PM

Lovely!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-09 10:36 PM

Ooooh Barry!!! Someone just turned the heat way up in Canada! Wonderful !
~Hugs, Nancy~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-01-09 10:59 PM

Karilea...when you comment...it says a lot..
thanx...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-01-09 11:00 PM

Oh goodness Karen...I think I have found
your romance button...Glad you liked this
poem...silly girl...Oysters again???

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-09 11:01 PM

Melissa, thank you very much...Happy that
you enjoyed..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-01-09 11:02 PM

Kay....two words or less...Aw heck...
I can't write two words or less...

thank you..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2002-01-09 11:04 PM

nancy, maybe my writing can help with the
heating bills...Can I get some of the
money saved sent here...Ink for my pen???

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2002-01-09 11:18 PM

Magnus darling boy this is utterly wonderful

Sometimes a star lands on these pages and illumes everything with is softly warming glow this is such a star

Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful