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Open Poetry #18

Gazing Upon Thy Shadow

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2002-01-09 05:24 PM

Once my Grandpa told me there is an eye in the sky
which observes all the realm of earth
to watch the children play and the stars glow.
Now I see it with my own eyes-
Methink it is more like an egg.
Tonight, I'm gazing the moon within its shadow;
by the skylight, I lay down on my armchair
thinking of you, missing your song.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-09 05:34 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, your words are always so touching and captivating! May you forever smile in these shadows as your loving heart reflects the visions of love! (kiss on cheek) Very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

2 posted 2002-01-09 06:40 PM

hey warm thoughts to you too.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-01-11 01:55 AM

Enjoyed...James

Keith Morgan
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since 2001-10-29

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Md

4 posted 2002-01-11 02:04 AM

Beautifully done. I enjoyed very much. smile

Write from the soul and the words will flow

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

5 posted 2002-01-11 04:01 PM

thanks you. I've just think of another scene of vision with 2 moons and... Well I'm going to make a picture and you'll see.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

6 posted 2002-01-11 04:25 PM

I like the vision in this, quiet, hopeful. Very good.

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