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vandana
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0 posted 2002-01-09 02:01 PM



This day,
This way,
This love,
This song,
Those days,

The roads are long and wide,
Even time goes by slowly,
In this way,
This day,
This love of oers,


This way,
In winter snows falls,
wind calls,
When summer comes,

This way,
This day,
Today,
Where all the things are going well,
you can't tell
why?

you can tell
why the this song
was wriiten
In this way,

The day to fall
one another,
Each leaves falls
Even when you hear wind calling,
The wind Is blowing,

The love Is flowing,
This way
for and why
and how heart surrunderes

This day
Day to heal,
Way to surrunder,
everything to you,
This Is the way,

This way
to love one another......

[This message has been edited by vandana (01-09-2002 02:06 PM).]

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Logan
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1 posted 2002-01-09 02:20 PM


Ahhh, now THIS is really quite lovely. I enjoyed the feel behind it..very gentle smile
strbbux
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2 posted 2002-01-09 02:24 PM


Vandana, "this way" of writing is simply beautiful. great poem. floria
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3 posted 2002-01-09 03:19 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always write the most beautiful words of love that bring sunshine to these pages! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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