Open Poetry #18 |
She |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
She is a dreamer, a dreamer of dreams, in search of her destiny, destined it seems, to climb every mountain, to climb every wall, while paying no heed, to the paymaster's call, hearing each whisper, of the whispering wind, reading each letter, no letters to send, for in her tomorrows, she finds her today, on a journey to ever, she ever will stay, within her soul's being, she ever will be, eternally searching, eternity. [This message has been edited by Tim (01-08-2002 11:30 PM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is great.. reminds me of a book I read not long ago..."Angels in a harsh world" by Don Bradley. I enjoyed Maree |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
She is a dreamer, a dreamer of dreams, in search of her destiny, destined it seems, to climb every mountain, to climb every wall, while paying no heed, to the paymaster's call, hearing each whisper, of the whispering wind, reading each letter, no letters to send, for in her tomorrows, she finds her today, on a journey to ever, she ever will stay, within her soul's being, she ever will be, eternally searching, eternity." Yes, how lovely, a journey that is eternal........I love this, I'm so glad to read you more often, I enjoy your poems very much. Kathleen-- |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Life is indeed a "journey to ever"... I know I'm still dreamin'.. Nice work, Tim.. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a perfect cadence and rhyme throughout Tim ... this was a wonderfully flowing read, very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Are you talkin' to ME? Are YOU, talking to me? You must be talkin' to me, 'cause there's nobody else here!" (serenity's DeNiro imitation--) Well it sure seemed like it anyway... Very nice work, Tim... |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I loved how this flowed along... with a very deep underlying meaning... or so I thought. A very touching piece ~ Tara ~ |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
This is excellent Tim. Flow, rhyme, and rhythm. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done Tim, I enjoyed this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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