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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-01-01 09:59 AM

Another in the Ramble Series.....

I greet the moon in darkness
Across space, the color of stone,
A figure in the light
A drop in a rainless sky
Romantic notations and
Empty pages
Of the dual dance
Of the morning after
Between the lines
Of distractions
My dark canvas waits
The intrusion of the dreamer
Which is not so simple
Drawing circles in the
Sand, watching the river
Bend and the leaves
Fall, never have I felt
Such intense passion
I was dreaming under the
Willow tree, I was reading you aloud
Like a poem, sharing favorite
Secrets
You kissed my hair
To awaken me,
I laughed and a~wait
For the night to
Come
~~~~~~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-01-2002 10:00 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-01-01 10:07 AM

Greeneyes,
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2002-01-01 10:24 AM

Lovely Lauren...Enjoyed..Happy new year to you..

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-01 10:51 AM

well, it's a beautiful ramble, Lauren, and I hope your New Year has started off on a good note!

I am/Kathleen/

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-01-01 12:00 PM

Love your rambles Lauren. Happy New Year with much love to you dear friend.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-01 12:03 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooooo beautiifully dazzling, sweet friend, I hope you are having the happiest morning to start the New Year! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Laura, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shsine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2002-01-01 12:58 PM

Beautifully written Lauren! Such a dreamlike quality to this piece ... a lovely flow. I very much enjoyed this!

Best wishes and a Happy New Year,
/Kit

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2002-01-01 02:13 PM

'I greet the moon in darkness
Across space, the color of stone,
A figure in the light
A drop in a rainless sky'

'I was dreaming under the
Willow tree, I was reading you aloud
Like a poem, sharing favorite
Secrets
You kissed my hair
To awaken me,
I laughed and a~wait
For the night to
Come'

Another excellent poem from you, Lauren! The images are beautiful...great write!

sp

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

8 posted 2002-01-01 02:18 PM

The images of this post .. amazing! I wish to go there someday myself! This beautiful and romantic..

Happy New Year!

~beth

"I woke you up and I slit the throat of your confidence, and we laughed in the night and I felt alright..." (3EB)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2002-01-01 02:27 PM

*sigh* absolutely beautiful. You paint as a master. I love the vision you wove here. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2002-01-01 05:31 PM

A drop in a rainless sky ...
such as a word on an empty page.
Such things have no physical appearance but the "feel" is real and these words have me feeling alot!
A beautiful ramble Lauren.
Wish you the happiness you seek in this new year.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

11 posted 2002-01-01 08:24 PM

Greeneyes - another beauty from your pen. One is as great as the other...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-01-01 08:32 PM

Lauren~So dreamy and very romantic.....
Thank you for this one sweetie.....
~Happy New Year to You and Yours~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

13 posted 2002-01-01 09:13 PM

Softly sensual and romantic...a dreamer's delight.

Nice work, Lauren. (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2002-01-02 05:12 PM

I greet the moon in darkness
Across space, the color of stone,
A figure in the light
A drop in a rainless sky
Romantic notations and
Empty pages
Of the dual dance
Of the morning after
Between the lines
Of distractions
My dark canvas waits
The intrusion of the dreamer
Which is not so simple
Drawing circles in the
Sand, watching the river
Bend and the leaves
Fall, never have I felt
Such intense passion
=======================================

you ramble across my heart feather light dear poetess L...
this is mystically exquisite.
Happy New Year Lauren.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

15 posted 2002-01-02 05:18 PM

the imagery alone is wonderful-- the content makes it even better. well done

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

16 posted 2002-01-02 10:56 PM

softly spoken Lauren. . .

this one just flows down the page. . . the images are just so delicate. . . as only you can do. . . well done. . .

---------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

17 posted 2002-01-02 11:33 PM

Seymour Tabin~

I appreciate your words thank you...

~~

Victoria~

Always delighted to see you....

thank you

~~

Irish Rose~

So far so good, but the year is young yet...*s* Be well Happy New Year to you as well...thank you for your words...

~~

Donna~

Much love to you as well my friend...

~~

Noah~

I just love your replies....you too have such a big heart...thank you for making mune smile....Happy New Year my friend~

~~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

18 posted 2002-01-02 11:34 PM

Kit McCallum~

such a pleasure to see you....thank you for stopping by, I appreciate your words~ Happy New Year..

~~
snowpants~

Thank you for taking your time to read, I wish you the best new year....

~~

Lady Lost~

when you find this place do let me know...

thank you for popping by...Happy New Year~

~~

Startime~

I appreciate you....

thank you my friend, and Happy New Year...

~~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-02-2002 11:38 PM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

19 posted 2002-01-02 11:36 PM

ctowen~

thank you for feeling this, and letting me know....happiness to you my friend...

~~
Bill Charles~

you humble me with your words, I am delighted you stopped by...thank you..Happy New Year...
~~
Nancy~

HUGS to you....I love the vibrant color of all your replies.....

~~

Michael~

Oh my friend....I so appreciate you....THANKS...hugs...

~~
Janet Marie~

from one butterfly learing to fly to the other....thank you for always knowing....

much...

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

20 posted 2002-01-02 11:37 PM

Jamie~

thank you for stopping by, I appreciate your kindness~ Happy New Year...

~~

Sven~

I thank you dear friend....Happy New Year and HUGS to you....

~~~

Peace to all...Be well Be safe....
Here's to another year of writing and friendship....

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-02-2002 11:39 PM).]

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

21 posted 2002-01-02 11:42 PM

Gorgeous poem!!!! So beautifully woven into the intensity of passion. BRAVO!!!! ***Ivy Rose

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

22 posted 2002-01-03 12:49 PM

Lauren,
You made me feel as if I was there. Loving pictures you have planted in my mind! Wonderful. And Happy New Year.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

23 posted 2002-01-03 11:49 PM

Hey thank you...I am so glad you enjoyed...I so appreciate your thoughts and kindness...

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

MatthewG
New Member

since 2002-01-08

Posts 2

24 posted 2002-01-08 09:42 PM

magic..lauren..this is absolute magic..i needed to read somethin' like this as of late..i'd forgotten the magic of poetry...

i can count on you always to remind me..

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

25 posted 2002-01-09 10:06 AM

thank you my friend....it can be magic...

its in all of us and do need to be reminded......

Lauren~

*****

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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