Open Poetry #18 |
Where Your Love Takes Me |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your love adorns my body Like the finest silver chain Making me feel so much alive As you take away my pain I carry with me a locket Around my neck with a picture of you It lays inside a golden heart And contains the initials of me and you Many dreams I had before you There was no love that I was seeing If I never actually met you I think I'd have dreamed you into being Sometimes I'm as giddy as a schoolgirl When I'm surrounded by your love As we walk together in the moonlight Beneath the heavenly skies above So soothing is your voice That whisper words of love so true As I shout from the top of the mountain How very much I'm in love with you This love we share is timeless I walk on air when you're with me I love you higher than any mountain And deeper than the sea |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe we all feel special when we're loved; every time I dream of my dream girl Joanna, I always feel like the happiest boy when I'm holding her! (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may love always fill your gorgeous heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Sue, wow, you seem to be so deep in love! I am very happy for you, you deserve it. I hope you show this beautiful poem to your guy, he will treasure it for sure. love, RP |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Suetang...WONDERFUL AMBIANCE in this romantic and love-filled poem. Super writing, Sue!!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Nice write. But how do you get any excersize walking on air? |
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Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
sigh...I love love. This was so pretty and I felt my heart just melt thinking about the words. Lovely, just lovely. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - something special you truly have... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful... you have something (and someone *S*) very special. *S* |
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