Open Poetry #18 |
Mirror |
Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Mirror by Randy Meador Look in the mirror my darling Tell me what you see Honestly, truthfully, seriously Because when I look at you I see my love Standing there comely Honest eyes reflecting back Majestic hair that waves artistically in the wind Sweet lips that has a magical touch of heaven All combining to make a beautiful smile Which can make even the devil’s day I also see the past Great memories of the years left behind Of nine years of you I have known And you are now mine And I am yours So look in the mirror my darling Tell me what you see a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
When I look into the mirror what do I see? Honestly, truthfully, seriously? I see the face of the one I've loved for so long. I see the face of the one I'll always hold dear. This face is the sweetest I've ever known! A face of the person who has been through the best years of my life, and I hope will continue to be there for many more. That is what I see in the mirror. This is a wonderful poem! . I love it!!! Forever Yours, Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
I'm sure she'll see love looking right back at her. Good write. -Streen |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy to see you've found true happiness and love! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, may her reflection always smile through the mirror to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Randy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Aww..a mirror of love! This was an awesome poem Randy straight from your golden heart. You and Noelle are very lucky to have eachother and I am lucky to have Noah!!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hypnosis - Very well done - enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Randy, she must see a lot of love..Wonderful poem. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hypnosis - she is certainly looking at someone special that has written a poem about someone special. Nicely written... BC |
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