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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 2002-01-08 05:49 PM


The Storymaker, 1

I flew into a poet’s fare
The poet saw me waiting there
With quill he flicked me far away
I still await his pen this day

He bides his time in lack of write
Though I wait alone through the night
He plucks at words most cunningly
For soon he shall be stunning thee

I know ‘tis so for I heard the wind
It called and said he would soon begin
To wind a weave most would never see
Except those who love Passions in Poetry

I know this to be as true as you
A mist shall come to pages blue
And it shall glide you, we know not where
If you but follow this poet’s fare

© Copyright 2002 Soleil Noir - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2002-01-08 09:39 PM


Hello Soleil Noir
I can't believe no one has commented on such an astounding piece of writing.  I thoroughly enjoyed this and will look forward to more from you.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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2 posted 2002-01-08 09:52 PM




(smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, oh my gosh, I'm so so happy Sue brought this one back up to the top, I almost missed your lovely words! (big hugggsssss) May we all together weave words on Passions and create stories of timeless beauty! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-01-08 10:15 PM


Nicely done indeed...enjoyed your words.

             ~Vic

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Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-01-09 02:01 AM


Soleil Noir - not only enjoyed your poem, but also your thoughts which you have placed in it...

BC

Klassy Lassy
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5 posted 2006-02-22 06:37 PM


Poetry does weave enchantment at times, doesn't it with mystic memories and metaphors and rivers of hearts to explore.

It's nice to 'meet' you Soleil.

  Karen

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