Open Poetry #18 |
When Asked, I Responded |
Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
When Asked, I Responded When asked, "Could you love a man Who worships you?" I said, “If he allowed me be taken seriously, Consider that I have value to lend That I am a bit independent But would harbor in his safety's bend Understand no argument is necessary To win me to his side Acknowledge I'm a loving giver To all friends my arms open wide Allow me to do for him That which would make me smile, This, then, my friend, Is for whom I would go the extra mile....” |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
do not go a mile simply step into my arms and seal the bargain Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Ms Noir - This is quite beautiful. He would be a lucky man indeed who met those criteria and held you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Soleil Noir - I would not worship, it's not in my heart. But to hold your hand, and give of me, would be my heart... Liked this very much, so true... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Soleil Noir, What man could not respond to this. Beautiful! Fair lady. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I know just how you feel, dearest friend, if one worships their lover, one can only love if one is faithful and takes trust seriously and is committed. (big hugggsssss) Sooooooo thought-provoking, sweet friend, I hope this person's questions has been answered with the dignity of true love! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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