Open Poetry #18 |
Only Then - Marsha's Challenge |
heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
Until the stars grow dark and there is no more day And the moon fails to escort the night on its arm Until icy topped mountains kiss sandy soft beaches And clouds become pillows beneath cloverleaf charm When the air catches fire and the seas dry to dust And the sun oversleeps, orange succumbing to gray When earth unfolds her hands, cradling coldness within And the wind smothers silent the thunderclaps spray Only then will I love you Any less than today. -heather I do not seek...I find! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Heather this is utterly fabulous, I'm loving the poems that are coming in. They are all so beautiful Each time I think nothing could be better and each time the challenge poem knocks me flat out with it's wonder. Absolutely fabulous writing, I love it Into my library with all the best poems, and the poets that I keep there churning out beauty just for me. So if you're ever wandering down the halls and you hear a faint whiplash echoing by, just ignore it love. It's nothing to be concerned over just me getting some extra work out of my poets. I wouldn't need to beat them if they didn't make me cry. (See what happens when you end up on the 'Crying List') Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just know Marsha will love this forever, this is soooooo beautifully surreal and original! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true classic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heather, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Heather, very, very good especially the way you ended it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Heather, LOL to long to wait. Great end, enjoyed |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Heather, This is beautiful. "And the wind smothers silent the thunderclaps spray" is a great line. Roger |
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