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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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0 posted 2002-01-08 12:54 PM


Each time, you listen
but nothings heard
your eyes, they glisten
for missing word

To release your heart
you wait and wait
for such words to start
but its to late

Echoes release tears
from pain filled eyes
crying heartfelt fears
heartfelt good-byes

Silence, unholding
as such as we
emptiness unfolding
empty we flee


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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2002-01-08 01:11 PM


Ctowen~

another tug of the heart....it can be so hard to release emotions, this is hauntingly sad, and beautifully written....Hugs to you...Peace...


Lauren~


Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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2 posted 2002-01-08 05:08 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) So very heartwrenching, sweet friend, it always feels so hard to the heart when one listens and expressions and peace are never beseeched. (big huggssssss) I pray that this emptiness will be replaced with golden silence and comfort, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

heather_kitn
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In The Kokapelli's Song
3 posted 2002-01-08 05:47 PM


Such sadness captured within such beauty.  Well penned on a subject that can become quite cliche to poets.

-heather

I do not seek...I find!
           ~Picasso~

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