Open Poetry #18 |
Silent Whispers II ... The Release |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Each time, you listen but nothings heard your eyes, they glisten for missing word To release your heart you wait and wait for such words to start but its to late Echoes release tears from pain filled eyes crying heartfelt fears heartfelt good-byes Silence, unholding as such as we emptiness unfolding empty we flee [This message has been edited by ctowen (01-08-2002 01:13 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Ctowen~ another tug of the heart....it can be so hard to release emotions, this is hauntingly sad, and beautifully written....Hugs to you...Peace... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-08-2002 01:11 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) So very heartwrenching, sweet friend, it always feels so hard to the heart when one listens and expressions and peace are never beseeched. (big huggssssss) I pray that this emptiness will be replaced with golden silence and comfort, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
Such sadness captured within such beauty. Well penned on a subject that can become quite cliche to poets. -heather I do not seek...I find! |
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