Open Poetry #18 |
+| ... All That You Are ... |+ |
Ocelot Junior Member
since 2002-01-07
Posts 40Texas |
All That You Are *~* My eyes are open, To all that you are, I won't shut them now, It's safe to come out, I look at your face, Feel out your sore heart, My life is too far, To be left all alone, Without the break I feel the same, Without the love I feel the shame, My heart has left don't leave me now, You're all that I have, You're all that you are, I look at you now, you're there somehow, I need you here, Just leave the fear, And if I die today, Please take what I say, Don't let me down, My love is around Without the break I feel the same, Without the love I feel the shame, My heart has left don't leave me now, You're all that I have, You're all that you are, +| ... Ocelot ... |+ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this reads like a soft love song.....I enjoyed this |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you write love so gorgeously! (smiles) May you forever be showered with cupid arrows and may the angels sing to the love you have close, which is all you'll ever need! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ocelot, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I agree with SEA~ this is very lyrical. Beautiful pattern and graceful tone. These are words we sometimes all need to hear. |
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