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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2002-01-08 06:33 AM

Pen Laying Dormant

The building of poetry
So verses fit together
To combine emotions
Along with the weather

The wall with no name
Surrounding my heart
A pen laying dormant
Now where do I start

I did need an opening
Of something to write
A kind of grey mood
Neither black or white

Not a cloud in the sky
On a bright sunny day
Surrounded by nature
Although nothing to say

My mind having views
Of dreams uncharted
How can I reach them
Feeling broken hearted

Often it is with words
Only a way to explain
At last I found the title
My poem of Heartpain

Hope© 2002

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-01-08 06:42 AM

HopeS - even though your pen lays dormant, it's a fine write...

BC

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2002-01-08 06:45 AM

Thanks Bill for your kind compliment
Hope

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2002-01-08 07:35 AM

Hope if this is a dormant pen, you would be amazing when your pen is active.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2002-01-08 07:38 AM

Thanks Kethry you made me smile with your reply ...... hey the mind is always active
Hope

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-08 08:55 AM

(sad sigh) So very sad, sweet friend, all our hearts go out to you and I pray with all my heart you write it out to us all, for we are always here for you! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, our hearts all go out to you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2002-01-08 09:13 AM

Thank you sweet Noah , you are one friend that is so caring and understanding
Hope

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2002-01-08 10:33 AM

*sigh* your pen is never dormant..it is always overflowing with the beauty of words weaving your unique visions. My heart goes out to you, Hope. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2002-01-08 11:03 AM

Thanks Karen , I appreciate you response
Hope

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