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Fallon
Junior Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 21
USA

0 posted 2002-01-07 10:59 PM

I stand inside a golden circle
counting fragments of time,
aching
for an outlet.

The moon shines on me as if
to hurl accusations through
every glow downward.

Still, I stay my ground,
waiting, I know I am not alone.

Writhing before me, with dagger
in hand you stand. Your sudden touch
is dry stone and I draw back,
falling in the circle, burning.

With one flickering move, I lunge
forward, falling, rising and
choking on sobs, clawing,
grasping.....

"I shall take you with passion
unfurled across our paths,
you are enclosed, here, trapped.
Your soul drives a wedge
through all that I encircle
us with"

But across my lips, I vow
a holy vow
and gather the ashes
from the burning fire
encircling us,
for I know that only one
flesh shall remain pure.

I seize fragrments of time
calling them, damning
the ash, stirring a caldron
with unspeakable dreams
that pour from a pen
filled with the ink
from a private hell.

[This message has been edited by Fallon (01-07-2002 11:35 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-01-07 11:00 PM

Oh, welcome, Welcome to the inner golden circle...PiP will be surrounding you with welcomes...

you're going to like it around here...

Please check your e-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-01-07 11:03 PM

But across my lips, I vow
a holy vow
and gather the ashes
from the burning fire
encircling us,
for I know that only one
flesh shall remain pure.

I seize fragrments of time
calling them, damning
the ash and filling a caldron
with unspeakable dreams
that pour from a pen
dripping with the ink that
burns from a private hell.
===================================

This is excellent vivid writing...your imagery is as powerful as your emote...
intense dramatic story telling in verse.
very cool poem... very impressive.
Welcome to Poetry Land ...its nice to meet you..I look forward to more of your distinctive work.
jm

Yes I've changed ...
so why couldnt you given all we've been thru,
could I still blow your mind ... leave you breathless.

~TS~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2002-01-07 11:04 PM

Fallon~
Welcome to the circle of friendship within poetry~

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2002-01-07 11:11 PM

"I seize fragrments of time
calling them, damning
the ash, stirring a caldron
with unspeakable dreams
that pour from a pen
filled with the ink
from a private hell."

very intense, very visual....I do like your style

Welcome

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-07 11:13 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Very impressive first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-01-07 11:15 PM

WOW!!!Welcome to Passions......I see by your writing that you write with a pen filled with incredible passion. I am going to really enjoy reading your work. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-07 11:28 PM

CLAPPING WILDLY!!! BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! Very intense and expressive, sweet friend, ay your loving quill always shine with inspiration and beauty! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, sweet Fallon, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fallon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Fallon
Junior Member

since 2002-01-07

Posts 21
USA

8 posted 2002-01-07 11:37 PM

Thank you for your replies. I held nothing back in this write.
It felt excellent to get it out. I appreciate your time in reading this!!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

9 posted 2002-01-08 12:18 PM

Hi Fallon...

I enjoyed your first post, im ready to see more : ) You will enjoy it here!!!

RP

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2002-01-08 12:45 PM

Hi Fallon
Welcome to Passions!

A wonderful write, very vivid and intense.
Great style, great writing

Maree

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2002-01-08 12:53 PM

Welcome Fallon, your words and thoughts are always safe in this circle. I enjoyed the intensity of emotion in this. Hope you enjoy this new home, and continue to pen your thoughts freely.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

12 posted 2002-01-08 01:02 AM

Fallon your writing is wonderful full of imagery and powerful wording

Welcome to Passions you will like it here

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

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