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In her way of thinking........for Marge
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In her way of thinking........for Marge |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 In her way of thinking Heart set in inking Truth in words read unblinking As stars shine in the twinkling In her way of thinking Soul revealed in inking together they are in syncing with champagne flutes softly clinking In her way of thinking Their duet of rhyme in inking It’s a matter of sly winking While two are romantic wine drinking In her way of thinking Lovely promise in inking Bound together in foreverly linking Blush of bride soft pinking ~SEA~ *for Marge and they lived happily ever after..... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...I love this, I just know Marge will love this beautiful verse your loving heart has written! (kiss on cheek) You are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! This is gorgeous and a true classic in my own way of thinking and feeling! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhhhhhh!!!!! Love this Sue! ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You do have a "way of inking" Sea---enjoyed this mucho! jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (01-07-2002 10:57 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA...she will love it! I do! Er, I mean Marge does...or will.... You know what I mean! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ And you said to me, 'with you, I think of magic, anytime I see something so beautiful, I have no words for it, I think, if Marge could see this, she would make magic with her words.' Then ... YOU wrote the magic of my heart~  How can I thank you ? I can promise to always look at things in a magical way~ Pen my heart in pink think of ink so that foreverly it will stay delicately stained upon the parchment of your heart just as this piece will foreverly be etched on mine~ *I love you for this beautifully written piece~ The mention of 'champagne flutes ... set my eyes to misting~ BIG HUGS .... Nah ... bigger than that ... *HUGS* Hey ... did Karilea steal my line ?? Tee-Hee .... I DO ! I DO ! Or ... at least I WILL .... 'soon'~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Have you ever captured her well. Such an excellent poem. I love it!!! I love it!!!**big hugs**  Very much in her way of thinking. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (01-08-2002 12:05 AM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sea such a heartfelt poem to celebrate her love, and you think ink really well  ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
So sweet and lovely.. a beautiful song from your "ink" pen Hugs, Pepper |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- This is so beautiful and just perfect for Marge. You are so sweet to have written this for her. Big hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Susan, this is absolutely delightful! What a perfect piece to warm the heart and celebrate Marge's nuptials. I loved the rhyme scheme you followed, very much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, SEA... as is Marge's way of thinking. *G* Great tribute! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful I know Margie girl loves it I read her reply, and YOU are such a sweetie to write this for her. As she is such a sweetie to the whole of Passions. Absolutely wonderful writing darling girl   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sea this was so so sweet and the picture added to it all. floria |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea how beautiful penned, and so Marge. Thank you for sharing your wonderful heart that shines in your words. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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