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Frost
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
The first draft of winter Is usually etched lightly on An early autumn dawn With extreme prettiness Reaching well into The falling horizon Occurring more often Until perfectly snown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, it's so great to see you again, we've all missed you so so much! (big hugggsssssss) What a beautiful vision to come back with, we all love you so much! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
From one "Toe" to another...thank you for the very sweet kind words...Love..MistleToe Rag.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love your poem...I do not believe I have had the pleasure.... ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, I'll send you a can of sunshine for a can of snow. Enjoyed |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Today was our first snowfall Your poem fits right into my mood for the day Nice poem Nice to see you again Liz |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I don't know that Sy can really can me, but he might try...welcome home Toe...good to see you out and about, even in the snown... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
We don't get much snown down here...shucks! Enjoyed jwesley |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Darn our rainballs drip right through your hands so it makes it hard to have a rainball fight in B.C. This was just lovely Toerag. ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* even though I am in Alberta we haven't had very much snow....I love the magic of it and keep hoping. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I take it on the last line is snown and not shown? It creates a pleasant picture either way. Look forward to reading more from you! |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
OMG.. whats this I see.. a Toerag????????? huggggggggggggs him up close.. I thought my toetag mentor gone never to return to us.. giggle.. they picked on me mercilessly..  it was terrible Toe.. they were mean .. specially that LongJohn.. what a meanie he is!!! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Hi there Nice to see ya again, lovely work Whiskey xx |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
My dear Toe, I might have known you made it snown And I was shown perfect picture bright And scattered cold in tremble told made me so bold to say you still delight! Welcome back. I've missed ya! *Huggles* Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh... I see your name.. warm up the old eraser...  ... and find you TipToe-ing through with a fine Soft-Shoe routine...Nice to see ya, Toe..  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
hmmm... there's GOT to be a hidden meaning in here somewhere. Some mean thing. But I can't find it. All I read is some pretty poetry stuff, and I know you better than that, you scalawag! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Snown? Snown? Is this a Toeism? A very pretty picture, Toe, here I was expecting a Balladeer or LgnJohn sneak attack! Corinne |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My best gift wasn't one I found Underneath my tree - It is the joy of seeing again Toe posting poetry! *S* This is beautiful, Toe... You've been so very much missed!!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I feel as if I fell asleep and woke up in the twilight zone! TWO serious poems from Toerag? I'm with LongJohn....and I have my Ovaltine decoder ring working overtime!! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
I like the imagery here. Makes this poem a wintry winner!!!!!!!!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Awww Toerag, it's sooo hot here.. could you send me some of that winter pleaaaasssseeeee.. even for just one day? Ah enjoyed reading this, I feel much more cooler now.. seriously I love it. Maree |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Toe, Perfect write. By the way, Lucie is just whining!  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so good to read you again...love it, even that we haven't snow here. but it's freezing cold. Charisma |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice to meet you finally, Toerag. I half expected some diabolical diatribe when I saw your name, after a few things others (AHEM jealous?) have said about your past poetic postings. To my surprise, I found a gentle snow falling. Very nice. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
One more thing - you know what they say: when the frost is on the pumpkin... Cor |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful imagery for the mind's eye Toerag ... wonderful to read you again, much enjoyed this lovely picture of words. Best wishes, /Kit |
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