Open Poetry #18 |
A Year Has Passed |
kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
A Year Has Passed Twelve months ago (just seems like yesterday) I packed my things (everything I owned) Gently you held my hand (you also held my heart) and brought me to my new home (our home) I remember the whispers (she has lost her mind) They just didn’t understand (but you did) My life will change (for the better) My spirit will soar (in the heavens with you) I never did believed (but I do now) That there could be such bliss (standing by your side) No longer I need to dream (pinch me--ow) of what true love is (touching your face gently) I let my words flow freely (as does my love for you) Telling all the doubters (someday they will accept this) that love has no boundaries (or borders in our case) it is as endless as time (always, forever and then some) when you read this (a smile upon your face) my soul will flutter (for our hearts beat as one) knowing the choice we made (perfection at its best) was a union meant to be (I Love You) -------------- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
kitkat, this is wonderful, and encouraging. You made a heart's choice, and it was the right move for you and for your mate. Hugs, and Happy Anniversary! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh Kathy...I love it, I love it!!! (sigh) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, it feels just like your heart is a muse speaking with you in this lovely poem and uniting you to your true love! (kiss on cheek) I love it, you are sooooooo romantic! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nicely done, my friend. Like the form too. jwesley |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A nice meeting of mind here, and Happy Anniversary! |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Awesome form you have here in this poem. It was really creative and catchy. You have a heart filled with much love I can see. I hope you live forever joyful with your loved one. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very creative form here! And...a Happy Anniversary to you both! Enjoyed much, hugs, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KitKat~ Such promise in the fulfillment of dreams~ And I know you've found such a love to keep you foreverly~ You happiness glows through your penning~ Happy Oneth Anniversary sweetie~ May it be the first of MANY~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Happy Anniversary...love happy endings! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thank-you all for your good wishes. It was a big step I took moving from the States to Canada..It was the best move I ever made... Take Care Kathy -------------- |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
KitKat, you moved to Nova Scotia.. my family stomping grounds (although I'm in Ontario) its my favorite place in the world. Where did you end up? Whats the last name, maybe i'm related...lol Congrats on the 1 year mark. Parker |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Congratulations, Kathy...Today is also the first anniversary for my husband and myself. We were married on Oct. 23, but it was exactly a year ago today, that we moved in together. Great poem. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (01-08-2002 04:34 PM).] |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
kitkat... This is beautiful. Love really does know no bounds, borders, limits or anything restricting! Congratulations on your first anniversary, and here's to many, many more! Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Kitkat, I am happy for you, and i love your style. floria |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
I really like the set up of this! Nice one! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I remember the whispers (she has lost her mind) They just didn’t understand (but you did) My life will change (for the better) My spirit will soar (in the heavens with you)' This is fantastic, kitkat...and not only because I can relate 100%! but I do love the style and the flow is perfect! Great poem! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
I like the way this form works. Well done. and HAPPY ANNIVERSARY !!!!! |
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