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Words Of Love |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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A string of birds gather along the wire Here they have such an enviable view They hear my words of love as they travel Across the distance between me and you The whispers in the tree tops Tell of a love that is so grand A symbol of such a love is shown As a heart etched in the sand The beginnings of a flower As it breaks through the earth The feeling that your love gives me This wonderful feeling of rebirth The secrets that remain hidden Within the depths of the sea The many hours of happiness That you continually give to me Through my pen I write my love Hoping my words will touch your heart And I hope your soul and mine Will never be far apart Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the secrets of the garden of your heart and whispers you sigh forever touch your love of your life as his will always! (kiss on cheek) Your words of love are sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love them all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Sue...nicely done..enjoyed your words.. ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Through my pen I write my love. lovely poem. floria |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Charles this is so sweet and beautifully written. I hope the love does get through and provide happiness for you and the lucky lady. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is really lovely. Hard to choose a favorite line, they are all so good. Hugs, Deb |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
The little birds above watch over all the love in the world. There gentleness is so unique, as is the marvelous placement of your words. Wonderful job Sue, Roger [This message has been edited by thepoeticplumber (01-08-2002 08:43 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful words penned here Sue! Enjoyed this one so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
This is a beautiful write. Please write more! -Derek |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all so very much for your kind words. I adore birds and felt the need to include them in my writing. Take care...Sue Suetang |
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