Open Poetry #18 |
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Lost In Your Eyes |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
This night is made for romance So much love is in the air My gaze moves in your direction As I catch sight of your amorous stare Your eyes they see right through me There is no need for us to speak My love for you can only be measured By the highest mountain peak The most vivid colors of the rainbow Are so very symbolic of you With you I fly above the crowd And look down to admire the view To you I so easily surrender As I lose myself in your eyes We'll scale new heights of passion As each day holds a new surprise With you right here beside me My feet rarely touch the ground How very blessed am I For this special love I've found Suetang |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
The poem was so wonderful. the last verse great. floria |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...I love this, isn't it so magical how love can sweep you off your feet and send you heaven-bound? )kiss on cheek) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you are a true Queen of Romantic Verse. I LOVE IT!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
::sigh:: quite lost in the romantic imagery... You wrote it so well.. ![]() Pepper |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Suetang- Beautifully said, my friend. I enjoyed this. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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