Open Poetry #18 |
In My Lovely Abode |
aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Lovely home of couches I lay down my whole blanket of body in sweet message from tender hands, where I relax with pipes of thoughts. With scents of candles fill the air, giving the abode a beam of stars, I lay my ink on the snow white of paper where I compose the state of my mind. ~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may your loving heart always quill the beauty of thoughts and fantasy in lovely verse! (kiss on cheek) May your lovely abode forever twinkle with inspiration! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Feels like home...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I have to tell you this is a marvelous piece of writing, it left me with a wonderful feeling of hope...in writing..life..everything. Kathleen-- |
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