Open Poetry #18 |
Another Place, Another Time |
Keith Morgan Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 114Md |
Another Place, Another Time From the moment I first saw you I knew we were meant to be For as you walked away A sparkling copper penny stood your place As I touched the penny My soul entered another realm A waking dream had come upon me An instantaneous drifting Into your world I now see you across the distant lake Dressed in the nighttime air My piercing glare gently nudges your heart Making you aware of my presence As our eyes make contact The lake creates a misty bridge That leads me to where you stand My feet float as if made of wings In a rush to embrace your outstretched arms But the hands of fate are cruel indeed And dreams are just that As you fade into the darkness Leaving me alone under the stars With my unfulfilled wish A cooper penny And the quiet whispers of time Marcel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somewhere in Time...and is this movie your inspiration? If not...it would have been.... very good, Marcel...thank you! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Keith, Awww... Just lovely Hugs, Tara |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
The lake creates a misty bridge That leads me to where you stand a romantic image you created in my mind..enjoyed very much Keith ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Keith very romantic and yes...much like Somewhere In time.....hugs. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Keith, this is a beautiful, romantic poem. Thank you for sharing it. |
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