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Goodnight
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Goodnight |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Goodnight Holding you Right Here In Thought, Heart, within my Soul Wishing you Sweet Dreams Sweet this Night’s Embrace Compassionate the Shadows Center me in You Eyelids Flutter Sighs Whispering Comes on the Wind Holding you Right Here ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 5 January 2002 |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
would be a wonderful feeling, wouldn't it? Kathleen-- |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, to me there's nothing more beautiful than to fall asleep staring into a lovers eyes and waking into the morning to gaze into those eyes and smile! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, you are soooooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
This is exactly how I felt each time I held my newly born babies. What a great way to tap into that feeling! Thank you. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I would love to be able to feel this way. I did, in a way, through your words. Thank you. I love this poem. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah, and I shall hold you, as you are there, here with me! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Just the right touch of exquisite in this one, Sunshine. The words are meant to be whispered...nicely done, poet |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Very nicely done indeed - I like the whispering in the wind part. It seems so real and familiar. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Just joining in to sing your praise.. a lovely write, my heart's amazed Hugs, Pepper |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Sunshine, You explain the feeling sooooo well. lovely poem, floria |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Sunshine - Very good. You definitely have a great style when it come to writing poetry. Each line has a very beautiful yet meaningful feel to it. Anyway, I enjoyed this one very much. Dave |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my soul YES it's exactly that way. He whispers Goodnight my goddess ........ Wonderful writing you always hit the nail on the head. Could you be a better writer? No I don't think so. Mmmmm utterly utterly perfect...... Goodnight   Love and warm stuff As always Puck  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Karilea....simply exquisite....hugs, Nancy. ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
Sunshine, this is tenderness in itself and travels so deeply..I really like this...Dusty |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a perfect poem, Karilea. As I was reading it, I noticed that if I read the first line of each vers, it was like reading a poem unto itself. The same is true for the middle and last lines also. It is as if you have written 3 poems within one poem.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Light as a feather, Sunshine. Softly wafting through the heart!!!!!!! ******Ivy Rose |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
hold me closely dear hear my whisper from afar hold me in your heart Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Sunshine. I really like this. |
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