Open Poetry #18 |
Bunny Flu Flu's New Glasses |
His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Flu Flu had been squinting Things were not very clear She couldn't see the chalkboard Unless she sat very near "What if I need glasses?" was Flu Flu's greatest fear Somebunny will tease me Four eyes is what they said She could hear critters laughing and her heart was filled with dread Teacher Tess had been watching as Flu Flu tried to see. Somebunny needs their eyes checked It's very clear to me. I must tell Mrs. Hare that Bunny has to squint. So she wrote a note to Mama and with Flu Flu, home it went. Mama read the teacher's note then she talked to Papa Hare. Flu Flu needed an eye exam so they took her quickly there. Dr. Hawk showed Flu Flu a chart to see what she could read But she couldn't see the letters Dr. Hawk said, "Glasses you'll need." "Come pick out a pair, they'll really help you see." So Bunny put them on and laughed out loud with glee. "Oh, look what I've been missing!" "Everything is oh so clear." "I don't even have to squint." "I'm so glad you brought me here." Flu Flu rode home in wonder, seeing things she had sometimes missed. She couldn't wait to tell Petey possum all about the optomistrist. "I don't care if I get teased." "Four eyes doesn't sound too bad." "I like my brand new glasses; seeing better just makes me glad! Don't let others teasing ever bother you. It's better to see clearly with four eyes than poorly with only two! Cheryl McClellan 12/31/2001 [This message has been edited by His Poet (01-08-2002 03:09 PM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very creative..unique poem indeed.. ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
well this made me smile.....and that's a good thing. thank you, *S* Atov |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Cheryl,I adored this I think I smiled all the way through.Thanks for my smile today. Juanita |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very creative, hmmmm you should write childrens books. floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very special, Cheryl...beautifully written, with a beautiful moral. I am so glad she can see again.... Please correct the spelling error here Flu Flu road home in wonder, seeing things she had sometimes missed. She couldn't wait to tell Petey possum all about the optomistrist. I think you meant rode instead of road. Really terrific Job, Cheryl!!!!!!!! copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Victoria, Thanks for reading. This is one of a series a poems I've written about Bunny Flu Flu. Hope you catch some of the others as I post them. Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Atov, If this made you smile, then I did my job. Thanks for taking time to reply. Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Juanita, Thanks for reading. I usually post these stories in a Childrens forum but there's not one here. Glad you enjoyed. This is one of about twelve I've done about Flu Flu. Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Floria, That is my dream! to find a publisher for my Bunny Flu Flu poems. I have about a dozen now and I would love to see them in print. Know any publishers? Thanks for reading. Cheryl |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Lyra, Thanks for reading and catching my error. I caught it and changed it on another site but forgot here. Glad you enjoyed the poem. I'll post more soon. Cheryl |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Cheryl, this is wonderful. -newell Sharing God's Love through |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOO CUTE AND ADORABLE, YET HAS SUCH A POWERFUL MESSAGE OF FAITH!!! (kiss on cheek) I love it, I love it, this would make a beautiful children's book! Have you ever thought about writing children's books, you would be so wonderful at those! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Newell and Noah, Thank you both for reading and yes Noah, my dream is to publish a series of these stories. I've just posted another one here and I posted one in December. Know a publisher? Cheryl |
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srsmith25 Junior Member
since 2002-02-07
Posts 22Indiana |
What a neat and clever poem. I loved it. I especially like the message at the end. Stacy Smith |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Stacy, thanks so much. This is one of a series of Bunny Flu Flu poems I've written. Glad you liked it and hope you'll read some of the others when you see them. Cheryl |
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