Open Poetry #18 |
Kayla-my youngest child |
angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Like sunshine in a window Where there was once a darkened veil A river in the wilderness running through a long dry trail. You came to me bright and strong smiling to soften hardened eyes. Those cynical fires that make ash of hope Are extinguished between your tender cries. A soul so old, in a body still small A gentle tender kiss in the breeze. You have shown me a truth, once lost for good Forever my heart will love with ease. love mom I can't control my destiny I trust my soul, my only goal is just to "be" -Lyrics from RENT [This message has been edited by angelbear (01-08-2002 01:18 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks MOM!!! Just loved this -- and you too!! jwesley |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Being a mom myself, this hit home! Great job...the love of a child can change your whole world huh? Cindi |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful declaration of love to your loving child, I love it! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much, God Bless You and Kayla! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cryan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
ohhh beautiful!!! There is no love quite like a mother's love! Someday when I have children I will think back on this heartfelt poem. RP |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh how wonderful children are, I love them. this was beautiful, floria |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You have a lucky daughter, Angelbear... This is a beautiful poem and speaks of your special love for your child. As I mother and a grandmother, I can identify with this feeling. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is so sweet, gentle and loving. I'm sure for Kayla it will become a keepsake. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
This is a very touching poem....I have a baby daughter as well, and her name is Kaila too.....Just spelled a little different. Well, I say baby...she will be 6 this Thursday (WHERE HAS THE TIME GONE?) [This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (01-07-2002 09:29 PM).] |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Thank you all for such sweet replied. It is so nice to have all of you to offer such kindness and understanding of these feelings. My baby girl Kayla is almost four. Anyone with children knows how much they can change your life. In my case, for many reasons, the youngest of my thee children changed me forever and made me (I hope) a better Mom to all of my children. :} Thanks so much for the love I can't control my destiny I trust my soul, my only goal is just to "be" -Lyrics from RENT [This message has been edited by angelbear (01-08-2002 01:22 PM).] |
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