Until The Stars Grow Dark (Marsha's Challenge)

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Open Poetry #18

Until The Stars Grow Dark (Marsha's Challenge)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-01-07 08:20 AM

Until the stars grow dark and there is no more day
Know that I am here and everything will be okay
When the air catches fire and the seas dry to dust
There are some things, which really are a must

Until the stars grow dark and there is no more day
You'll never want to listen to a word I have to say
When the air catches fire and the seas dry to dust
Things you'll have to do, people you'll have to trust

Until the stars grow dark and there is no more day
Maybe it will do some good for you to kneel and pray
When the air catches fire and the seas dry to dust
It won't do you any good to sit around and cuss

© By Sue 1-7-02

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-01-07 08:45 AM

SmartChick,
I love what you did with the words and the repetition...brilliant.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-07 05:08 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beautifgul, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is such a beautiful challenge! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-01-07 05:16 PM

Smat Chick Oh wow this is lovely, I love what you've done with the lines.

This too is a keeper fabulous writing YOU are too good

Well done with this one

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2002-01-07 05:17 PM

*giggling* I love the way you put this little gem together. It put a smile on my face. Thank you. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-01-07 06:22 PM

Smartchick. what can I say, You are one
" smart chick " I like how you did this.floria

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