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Is love really enough ?
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Is love really enough ? |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Sometimes Love is not enough I hear my heart speak, You need to have the other things that make the emotion complete. Things like fun and laughter Romance and a song, Someone prepared to listen not to judge or say your wrong. So often we hear the words that at times we all agree, What scares me the most this time, The words are comming from me. Expressions, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Fiona, sometimes love is not enough...and sometimes it is more than enough. Cool poem! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Maybe it will be enough. Nicely done. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well I always thought it was a package deal..all those things are the action of love...revealing the truth of love...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very touching - sometimes it's painful to see things come home...isn't it; sorta like growing up -"never thought I could EVER get THAT old!!" Know whereof you write Fee... Well spoken... jwesley |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Sometimes words are not enough when it comes to love...I believe actions speak a whole lot stronger than words...this is beautifully written  Great job!Cindi [This message has been edited by cpalmer (01-07-2002 04:47 PM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Fee, It is scarey when you finally admit that you have given yourself to the one you love. It is SO worth the fear and apprehension. Good write. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I too believe that actions speak much louder than words. Words can touch my heart and make me weep but actions show me what is said is true. A powerful poem...thank you. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I know just how you feel, sweet friend, dearest Fiona, sometimes love alone is not enough, we need assurance and must be faithful and judge in time of need, and actions explain so much more! (big hugggssssss) Soooooooo meaningful, sweet friend, God Bless You! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Fiona, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
~ Kethry - True, but it is hard to tell the difference sometimes. ~Sandra - I truely hope so, hugs 4 U ~ James - as another saying goes "Love is what you make it". ~JWesley - So True - we grow so fast before we even notice and then it is usualy too late. ~ Cindy & Startime - Your right, actions speak much loader than words and are usualy heard more clearer - Big Hugs ~Tara - Submission of one's self alone speak the words of love, Your right - It is worth the risks. ~ Noah - sweet sweet Noah. Many a times your light has shined in your words and brightened my day... Special Hugs. Thank you all for your love and thoughts, they do mean alot to me. Fee Expressions, |
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