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Don't End This Dream
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Don't End This Dream |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
The call I felt came through so clearly Much like a whisper in my ear I heard the yearning in your calling Quick as thought I joined you there Looked round with dawning wonder The beauty of this magic place Then I felt your presence by me Gazed upon your loving face Hands met and locked together As we began to walk along The sandy beach warm and inviting The ocean's voice so low and soft So close to you, shoulders were brushing No words required, our hearts just one As if on cue, drawn by desire We turned to meet, face to face Held within a four-armed fortress Pulses skipped and fires raced Eyes locked with intensity Lips descended ... almost met... Then I awake and .... realization I cry aloud 'Oh God' Too soon... You can't, not yet .... Don't end this dream. [This message has been edited by peppermint35 (01-08-2002 01:48 AM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is lovely, sometimes the dream lasts longer..... Kathleen-- |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Dreams are a healing element in our lives and help shed light on reality. Nicely done |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Nicely done, Peppermint! I like the shift in form midway, and the return. It ties it together so nicely. [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (01-06-2002 10:23 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper darling girl this is utterly utterly wonderful And have I been there, YES! I know exactly what you mean. Sometimes though the dream is just the beginning and then ....... MMmmmm delicious vision As always darling girl I was there with you though all of this, and you shine darling girl. Absolutely fabulous writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love to dream, and dreaming of love is my favorite dreams of all, and dream that I can wake up and find true love with me. (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, may this dream forever come true for you and bring you eternal happiness! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lavenia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A beautiful dream this is. It is such a shame to have to wake up isn’t it? If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Do you usually write in your sleep, Pepper? If not, you should keep right on doing it. This was very beautiful.  I loved reading it. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Most of my dreams are sooo wonderful that I wish they were reality! This was such an enjoyable poem! RP [This message has been edited by RosePetal (01-06-2002 07:18 PM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
have had a few dreams like this....*sigh*  Nicely done "...and she swears there's nothing wrong |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*shoot* I dream like this all the time. It just drives me crazy..you have written it so well I thought I was caught up in one of my own dreams. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
peppermint35 - and what a dream this was. Perhaps next time it will be for real... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I wish dreams could last forever, don't you? This was a nice dream, I have had it. Sandra |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you everyone for reading and your very encouraging remarks.. I got the warm fuzzies. Kathleen.. yes.. I hope this one lasts longer next time.. frustration is setting in... lmao Ecrivan.. thank you!!! nice compliment from you!!! LJA.. I'm glad .. I was hoping it did ... Marsha, darlin'... I'm sure you were with me every step and every line.. that's just your heart and your wonderful sense of things.. thank you!!! and big hugs too (beating hearts are open ones, don'tcha think??? :  :Noah.. you have a lovely heart, always so kind.. thank you.. you helped make my day!! Tracey.. I am so glad you liked it. Madame Chipmunk.. sometimes I think I do.. perhaps it's better in my sleep, you think? lmao .. thank you. Rose Petal... so glad you liked it. SEA!!!! big hugs!!! thank you, thank you, thank you Startime.. thanks so much.. that's a boost. BC, I hope.. I hope.. I hope ::laughs:: James.. thank you and so happy you liked it. Sandra, sweet lady.. thank you for reading.. I sure do hope this one lasts.. forever.. I'm working on it.. Pepper |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
these are the kind that make you try really hard to go back to sleep thinking that you'll pick up where you left off, but it never happens... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Pepper, what a delightful penning of a dream, I wish I could dream like you...in fact I wish I could dream at all. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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