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the gallery bar--(Magnetic Poetry) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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aesthetic beer thin surreal scream absurd paint an investigated passion she to him her fashion metaphor is electric green performing every purple silhouette as if a masterpiece knows how appear angry model nude feel with music never black and enter the museum of time where canvases hang next to sculptures in delighted air walk around squarely and remember that the tour is always free --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Uniquely you...I am finding this fascinating. Another wonderful magnetic poem from another poet of magnetism! Bravo, Sir Sven!!! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This was meant to be read/heard aloud. Wow, Sven...most impressive. And very enjoyable, too. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! A gallery of words and impressionism to marvel upon from your loving heart! This is magnificent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - only you could write like this my friend... Just fantabulous... BC |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I was strangely attracted to this piece...and I wasn't disappointed. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very cool, Sir Sven. Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands, regale us more with your offerings as they are too few and far between  |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Hey I like this, tell me please just what is magnetic poetry....? Too cool~! Atov |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I havent wrote one of these magnetic poems in a while..you did very well sven  Hope your holidays were happy. ~Vic "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Soooooooo nice, floria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely words here, I may have to try this challenge....though...LOL great one Sven!... Lauren~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! I read this aloud and loved it....Stunning, Sven, as only you can make it. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks everyone. . . this challenge was fun to do. . . I may have to do it again. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Incredible writing Sven... I gotta tell ya sweetie like our friend Duncan has said above when I read this poem aloud it was totally awesome... I verrry bearrry much enjoyed this read... Hugs2uDearPoetFriendSven *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
my friend,you always write soo good |
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Sunset Member
since 2002-01-08
Posts 80 |
I'm not familiar with this type of poetry, but I do like the individuality of it. My compliments. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write by a very magnetic poet! Love it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
It is very fascinating in its entirety. Thank you for the write. -Streen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is wonderful, John, so many colorful images here, and I have been thinking about taking up painting. Kathleen-- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
again, thanks to everyone that's replied. . . you're all great. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Came looking and so glad I did, wonderful work here, how are you and hope the holidays were great. Love, Cerenity |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
I loved it! everything about it, |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
I HAVE MISSED YOUR WITTY INVENTIONS OF PURE POETIC PLEASURE, MY FRIEND...HOW ARE YOU? AN EXQUISITE TREAT FOR ME, THIS EVENING..THANKS, KOKO Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sven Pen! This is very alluring. 5 stars...and then some. Art through your eyes is very divine. So glad I came across this piece! Bravo!! Sincerely, Regina |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you everyone. . . it's nice to see you all again. . . welcome back. . .---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, you've done it again. How did I miss this one? This one was excellent! I've played around with magnetic poetry, but I don't think I can do what you have done here with it. Still have that whole infatuation with green, I see...I think this is the way you use it here has been the best so far, Sweet Sir! Did you write this with your gallery poems in mind? I'm almost sure you did.Yep. Good thing I did a search because I was missing your poetry. I've found another treasure for my library. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
We don't call you the SVEN PEN for nothin', yanno?! This is way cool...I used to do magentic poetry a few years ago, it would often spark my muse. And, it certainly made yours twinkle! Excellent, m'friend.It's good to see you posting again keep in touch~ Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Well, I'm looking through my library finding my favorites. WOW! This one has two pages worth of replies. Its no surprise to me though. After all, it IS your work. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hmm..if I have you in my library, then why aren't you still on my shelves? Geesh... adding... How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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