Open Poetry #18 |
Celtic Tides & Warm Goodbyes |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Celtic Tides and Warm Goodbyes Let the wave of love Wash o’er me Play Erin’s music Then soon to sea For tide and time No moment awaits, Then meet me love, By garden’s gate. For across the sea ‘tis my time to fly And soon, so soon Shall white winds Carry to me Your sweet cry Could you but Hear my heart This breaking sound Would thus impart The soft of flute The sweetest air For you are held, With greatest care For across the sea ‘tis my time to fly And soon, so soon Shall white winds Carry to me Your sweet cry Let the leaves of This green glen Seek me softly In memory when You are torn And sorrow filled Send yon bird to sing, I’ll then again be thrilled For across the sea ‘tis my time to fly And soon, so soon Shall white winds Carry to me Your sweet cry If but for a moment You believe me gone Then look to the stars I’ll sit on one I’ll be in your hair By the sun’s light I’ll be in your eyes Each stormy night For across the sea ‘tis my time to fly And soon, so soon Shall white winds Carry to me Your sweet cry. ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 6 January 2002 photo courtesy of: http://www.iol.ie/~discover/images.htm [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-08-2002 01:22 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* okay....this one just has to go into my library......it is such a masterpiece that I had to read it 3 times and each time I was left in awe. Absolutely wonderful writing.....it sings as if from the green clifts that your graphic shows. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OOPs just me again...into the library remember. There...now I have you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My heart is filled to the brim with "you are there, here with me's" and I send my gratitude for this tender rendering. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Wow, Sissie, this is one of your best. Very lovely...very gentle smile |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
If but for a moment You believe me gone Then look to the stars I’ll sit on one I’ll be in your hair By the sun’s light I’ll be in your eyes Each stormy night ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Karilea...You have managed to make me hold my breath again while reading! Stunning, beautiful...I can't find the words. You amaze me!! ~Hugs for this one, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) OH MY GOSH, THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!! (smiles) I love Celtic stories and visions, this is dazzling! (kiss on cheek) You always help me envision all these beautiful landscapes and myths, they're all sooooo gorgeous! (smiles) Can I print out a copy of this, I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh how lovely is this,, I was just listening to celtic music and it goes so well with this. floria |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Amazing! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is not a poem It is a song Of love and of beauty Melodic lyrics echoing off the Celtic hills A stunning piece Displaying once again how diverse your poetry Liz |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bualadh bos a bua na filíochta! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is simply beautiful, Karilea. The promise of reunion and loss. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, if it is possible to have a favorite of yours, this might be it. Stunningly beautiful. I can't think of anything else worthy of it, to say. Sandra |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
A LYRICAL and MAGICAL rendering of Irish beauty and Irish love. LOVED IT!!!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Just like a pint of guinness this was worth the wait I like, Regards, Olias, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* this is beautiful......truly a wonderful gem, into my library. Charisma |
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