Magnetic Poetry Poem: This Whispered Place

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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

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MA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-06 03:21 PM

dream beneath
blue beauty,
sing moon poetry
of delicious applets
see what this
whispered place
will tell
to wind and sea

sleep a rose spring

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-01-06 03:24 PM

Ivy Rose,
Enjoyed the read.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-01-06 03:26 PM

gorgeous and dreamy, like that comfortable place just as the dreaming begins...

I liked this very much!

A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

3 posted 2002-01-06 03:39 PM

Now that's what I call brevity packing oodles of image~!

excellent, *S*

Atov

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-01-06 03:41 PM

Very very nice....enjoyed! Hugs.

~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~

Keith Morgan
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since 2001-10-29

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Md

5 posted 2002-01-06 03:54 PM

sweet words, that taste like candy. enjoyed!!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-01-06 04:02 PM

soft and dreamy, enchanting!
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2002-01-06 04:31 PM

Ivy, I do believe you've caught the magic of the challenge!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2002-01-06 05:02 PM

I floated on the vision of these words. Ivy...even with few words you create the most wonderful visions. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

9 posted 2002-01-06 06:18 PM

To each one who took the time to read thiis poem and comment....

v

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your comments are much appreciated.

**********Ivy Rose

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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10 posted 2002-01-06 06:20 PM

This is now my alltime favorite poem..................

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-01-06 06:43 PM

Oooh this is soooo sweet ivy rose. short and sweet, floria

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2002-01-06 07:13 PM

Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love your beautiful verse! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, spring reflects in your heart! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

13 posted 2002-01-07 03:20 PM

I don't know about the challenge but I do know I like this work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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