Open Poetry #18 |
Whispers In The Whistling Wind |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Play Isabelle Song ~* open then minimize to hear with the poem *~ ~* Whispers In The Whistling Wind *~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, but on the sending out on the wind, the messages go to Willow, and she smiles that you remember, and whispers back to the wind which returns to you....very gentle smile |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh Mysteria, this is so sad, and yet so incredibly beautiful. And the picture is gorgeous. Such tender love you have in your heart, where your Willow still resides. I wish you Peace and Happiness, throughout this new year. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mysteria, Beautifully done! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In your missing times, we learn more of who there was to love, and come to miss her almost as much as you...but your sharings keep that which was most important of her, her spirit, alive... so in that, I thank you for taking time to feel... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Above an opal velvet sky, moonlight wears a tiara of stars. The wind whispers a gentle song, and I remember a time that was ours. Moonbeams ricochet off the rocks, in a kaleidoscope of color, then silence becomes deafening, as I sit there lonely hour after hour. ====================================== this is a lovely, touching inspire Sharon...your imagery is a perfect poetic backdrop to enhance your emotional release...with every aching write ..we heal in the words...and grow in the light. heart-hugs jm "Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mysteria, the sea has a way of soothing and healing. That is where I go when I need it. Loved this. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sharon, you have so many lovely tributes to your friend. I know she is proud of you. I can only imagine how much this hurts, as I have a close girlfrend, since we were toddlers, and if she was gone,Iwould be devestated. Peace, and Huggs to you. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mysteria, Sending you a to give you a for this beauty. |
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AJ MacNeil Junior Member
since 2001-05-02
Posts 40 |
As one who is privileged to have walked by your waters with you, who has sat with you and watched the sun set across the ocean .. who has seen the love in your heart mainfested in your smile and in your eyes ... I can feel so much of this Sharon, thankyou so much for sharing it ... one day WE will come back and share it all again with you .. I promise ! :O) Andy |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I know exactly what you mean. I have my places too where I sit and remember. Beautiful poem Sharon, who knows, maybe sometime I'll sit beside you, for I really love the sea. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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heather_kitn Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 61In The Kokapelli's Song |
This is utterly sad and beautiful...well versed! -heather |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Sharon, this is just beautiful. I love to read your poems. You are so talented. Thank you for sharing this. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is really lovely. A real masterpiece written from the heart of you. Deb |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sharon, This poem came with a load of goose bumps. Wow so wonderfully expressed in ways that make the loneliness not so intimidating. This is a keeper for sure. Thanks. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mysteria this is so incredibly beautiful, the imagery and the flow utterly perfect. Wonderful sigh to Willow, and what a wonderful hearts gift she is. Thank you for delighting me with this wonder As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Logan ~ yes that would be her style and send me the bill too *wink* thank you. Kacy ~ I wasn't going to post this one until I saw this picture and it just worked! Thanks. Ketrey ~ Happy New Year - thank you! Sunshine ~ Were I really gifted with words, there would not be enough to describe this woman trust me! Thank you so much for your "forever hugs". Sandra ~ Make sure you tell her how important she is and love her now, but I am sure that you do. Thank you. Janet Marie ~ Bless you and your "sick computer" for stopping in, thank you and I mean that too. Dee ~ The sea is my friend, always has been and always will. I tell her everything too. Thanks. Seymour ~ Funny - I felt an inch on my cheek. It arrived - and I truly thank you for it too! Andy ~ Yup, still sitting in the same place since you went back to Australia! I do come home for food and clothes once in a while! LOL, I sure hope you do come back it was fun! (hugs) Titia ~ My door is always open if and when you come to Canada and I mean that! heather_ktn ~ Thank you for finding the beauty in it. Smart Chick ~ You make me smile so with your constant praise, as I don't consider myself a poet at all in this company but thank you. Blooming Rose ~ Thank you for your kind words. Larry ~ Right! That is the secret to the lonliness - release it - let it go and remember the good things of what they were. That is why I go there, to remember as it was a favorite place. Marsha ~ She was a gift indeed, thank you for enjoying my sharing of her. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sharon, this is soooooooo sad but soooooooo incredibly beautiful, my heart goes out to you but I know deep down with all my heart Willow will neevr forget you and she will always look down to smile and guide you with her love! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, she is so lucky and happy to have such a loving close friend...you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You are wonerful poet who writes of love with such depth and beauty. I love your phrasing "on the other side of loneliness" and all that it implies. This is superb, Sharon Liz |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
" above the opal velvet sky" Oh this is wonderful writing. I loved reading this. floria |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mistletoe Angel ~ She not only looks down - she trips me some times LOL, thanks Noah! Vandana ~ Thank you. Elizabeth ~ Such a compliment from a heart that knows. Thank you. Strbbux ~ How kind, thank you so much. Thank you for giving me the secret to music for my soul! Muchos Hugs. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sharon, this is so sad and so beautifully written. I love the perfect imagery you used here Above an opal velvet sky, moonlight wears a tiara of stars. The wind whispers a gentle song, and I remember a time that was ours. A perfect tribute to your friend. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I had a feeling that I would come back to find this, with the music working, and yes, m'dear, it is that much better for it... bless your heart... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sharon, yet another beautifully penned poem to honor dear Willow. With every one of your 'remembers' we grow to know Willow a little more, and in so doing you keep her spirit alive. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
If I were asked to discribe true friendship .?. I would have to have them read your poems to your dear friend Willow.. Your whispers of love echoes in the ripples of the oceans currents that resounds the wonder of your caring heart. You are rich indeed to have had such a friend to love. I'm sure she is smiling down upon you each and everyday. If you still your mind and listen to the wind you will hear her laughter and feel her embrace. See what your artful talent has me do? I get off on a tangent...lol... Keep Willow alive with your poetic gift. Love and peace Maggie ((~.~)) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This moved me, and I was beginning to think I was dead inside. Kathleen-- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sunshine ~ I guess I am tenacious right? Bless your pea-picking heart too Enchantress ~ There are so many to her, I can't post them all here, so I made her a page at my site, and it grows all the time. Thank you for being interested, I truly appreciate that. Flutterwings ~ When they were handing out love you sweetie where right up there with Mother Theresa, and I really appreciate you "coming over" to read this. A big hug for Shiloh from me Gramma. Irish Rose ~ When numb - sing or dance, even by yourself, any place and any time! I am not kidding it revives your spirit. I do it all the time, and so far they haven't taken me away in a straight-jacket! I am glad it moved you that means you are alive! [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-05-2002 09:50 PM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Beautiful Mysteria. So very strong your jewel of friendship. You still create such extraorinary visions of beauty in her memory. Forever precious . Thank you for sharing this treasure. ((Warm Hugs)) Sincerely, Regina |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Regina ~ She inspires me in the strangest ways now, even moreso than before, and I thank you (and for your lovely Christmas card too). Your hand-writing is as delicate as your words, and I somehow knew it would be. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-06-2002 01:59 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sharon, this is absolutely touching and exquisite. Your poetry amazes me dear lady, and your warmth is spread over us like a wonderful blanket. This is a beautiful tribute. Hugs and peace to you this New Year On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Your heartfelt feeling drift to Willow upon the gentle winds of your soul. Absolutely stunning. This poem brought tears to my eyes. Of course most of your work does but this one is very special indeed. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
This is so wonderful! I nearly cried reading it! So much emotion and feeling was put into it. Great job! Happy New Year! Noelle |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gentle Spirit ~ thank you so much for reading my poem (I love your work too) and the lastest you did using song titles was brilliant! Startime ~ Your kindness is so warming and I do thank you. Mistletoe Angel ~ Sorry it made you sad, as remembering her is my joy! Thank you for reading it. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Madam Chipmunk, Sunshine and Enchantress ~ Thank you all so much for such kind comments. I do appreciate your reading this. |
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