Open Poetry #18 |
Art ( serenity's magnetic poetry challenge) |
Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Art Old drunks free purple beer raw psychedelic scuplture ate passions fashion performing models balance empty latex more wasted film you can see hard black angel sex canvassed in silhouette and investigate the nude metaphor of her angry masterpiece made absurdly aesthetic experiment come imagine art There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Jamie, I am loving this!!! Perhaps I have carnival on the brain but the opening lines of this reminded me of snapshots of Mardi Gras... (isn't this fun?) Enjoyed it much, me friend! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo inventive and marvelous, I love the silhouettes your pen paints. (big hugggsssss) With the beauty of poetry we can always criticize art and create art of our own! I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jamie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
silhouettes in shadow, loved what you did with the thought fragments. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity will get absolutely NO work done if we keep this up... and you did an excellent job! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* I am more into works of art done with natures paintbrush...This one had me seeing all kinds of different things. A great write for the challenge. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmmmmmm. . . I see that most of these magnetic poetry poems are talking about art. . . perhaps we've all been to the same museum??? well done Jamie. . . I like it. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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